Torn Picture

EVER SINCE A LIL KID

IVE BEEN A TORN PICTURE

COZ THE PAIN

OF NOT HAVIN A FATHER

PUT ME IN A TWISTER

REACHIN OUT

BUT NEVER BEEN REACHED

BY MY FAMILY

THEY TRIED

BUT COULDN’T UNDERSTAND ME

I DIDN’T KNOW WHO TO TURN TO

IN MY TIME OF NEED

PPL SHOWED ME WEED

BUT IT WAS THE TOOL OF THE DEVIL

MADE ME CURSE THE WORLD

HAVE I BEEN MENTIONED

I DON’T THINK SO



GREW UP WITH FONEY BROTHERS

WHO TALKED ABOUT ME

THEY USED TO BACK BIT

THEY WERE SOUR

AND DISGUST ME

SHOWING ME THAT I COULDN’T TRUST NOBODY

HAD TO LEARN EVERYTHING THE HARD WAY

BUT IVE BN LIVING THE DARK WAY

PUT IN A SHADOW THAT NOBODY COULD SEE

MY LIFES BEEN FUKED

SO F'U'K EVRYBODY

WHO THINKS THAT IM CRAZY

POINT AT ME AND LAUGH

SEE WHAT IT DOES TO ME



SUM TIMES I LOOK UP

AND ANALYSE THE SKY

AND ASK MYSELF

WAS I MEANT TO BE HERE

AND WHY

WHY I ALWAYS MESS UP

WHY I CANT LIVE STROGER THEN THEM

WHY I JUST BREAK DOWN AND CRY

COZ IM A BURDEN TO MY WORLD

COZ I AINT GOT A HEART THAT FEELS FOR OTHERS

U CAN HIT ME WIV UR STORYS

BUT THEY DON’T MATCH UP

2 WOT I GOTTA DEAL WIV

EVERY TIME I WALK IN TO MY HOME

AND EVEN WEN MAMMAS TEARS DROP

I DON’T HAVE THE DECENCY TO ASK WHY

AND TELL HER TO STOP

SO MY HEARTS BLOKED UP ITS TURNIN BLACK

I DON’T CARE HOW Bad IT IS

I JUS LISTEN TO PAC AND SHED SUM TEARS

IT AINT FEAR.

WHY TEL ME DAT

U CANT

SO IM BUSTIN OUT.

not bad poetry, was very deep and honest, i liked it....keep writing

Thanx Man Jus Tryna Keep It Real Son.

what ya'll think bout this let me know. holla.

i think you need to work on your structure. you've got to make full lines in open mic and turn off the CAPS LOCK KEY because it makes the piece hard to read and seems like you're trying to shout. Work on your vocab as well, you need something pretty sophisticated to get recognition on here. The topic was ok, but you're structure ruined it for me.

Keep elavating.

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