Focused - Old Piece

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Yall aint never gonna beat me... Plus yall soft and wack
Yall cats is nuthin... Thats why i brush you off like plaque
Just sit back, and if an ill rhyme is made, Just dont sweat it
Cuz like an out of order arcade game, you wont get credit
It's pathetic, and most of you cant match what my pen holds
It's like giving 11 emcee's deals, just to watch ten fold
not drunk, just high, yall dont know what sweating brings
So instead, i stay around joints kinda like wedding rings
Plus i dont ever mix words, or give you anything to dispute
I just 'cut to the chase' like CNN and police pursuits


Yall know im heading for success faster than nascar speed
Plus its true... my styles 'off the chain' like 'lost car keys'
There's no way u can break down, ya motor aint even startin
Yall the type to buy a 'sale'-boat and think you got a bargain
And while i be puttin in overtime.. Yall be on that sudden shit
Thats why my clever material is like 4 + 4, you only get 'sum' of it
The two words to describe me... would be talent and respect
So fuckin with me, will put ya 'life in jeopardy' like 'Alex Trebec'
Yall about to be 'take'n-a-part'.... Similar to 'hungry actors'
Then i'll snap ya neck, like you was doing the bungee backwards

Have you strugglin for breath, tuggin between life and death
They say nobody has the answers, but im the type to guess
So fuck ya wealth, cuz you really dont wanna test my skill
Plus yall 'paper aint long' yall just tryin to 'stretch ya bills'

So if you think you can beat me, step up to the challenge
Cuz you wannabe vets..will end up tossed like fruit salad

Word.....

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[B]damn that shit was harsh.....but you beat em down...they cant speak they got a leak in their beak.......

You had a lot of wordplay in this, definitely keep that up. Some ideas worked better than others, but there were a few nice ones. Keep practicing in battles to hone that skill. The verse was structured good, made it easy to read.
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aiight not bad dogg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pz....7.5/10

This was a real nice verse it was a good introduction from you the punches were tight some of em i was laughing my ass off a couple were average but there was nothing in this verse i could hate.
Your vocab and structure were fine youve got a nice flow too.

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Good look on feedback ill hit up your OM's

that was whack.if u mad at what i said then lets battle

Who are you ? lol I dont even know who you are the only forum i have posted in on RB is this one noob lol get outta here

Sick nice son, Lots of quotes in dis son, 8/10.

Keep the work up son.