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The Introduction
SJ.King- Intro
man i come through hard, im bold
slap a nigga so hard dat his silver turn gold
my ice is so expenssive that its freezin cold
ill slap u from young to old
im either tellin u or its been told
im brave im confident so i puff my chest
im not average man im the best
i have higher expectations so i settle 4 nuthin less
u can call me a nerd cuz i got an A on every test
all of yall should know my name
all the girls play my games
u mad? im not the 1-2 blame
u dont understand let me try 2 explain
i tell u ill make u shiver
when i show u my bullets of silver
like a mailman i will deliver
ill bury u like lost treasure
yo this is my 1st freestyle
and no i didnt copy from 8 mile
i've been doing this 4 a while
if u think im whack u probably hit ur head on the tile.
a girl will always say yes neva no
have a bitch singing omarions "O"
in my room ill tell a girl 2 get low
i think im bou 2 bust in 1,2,3,4
sorry i couldnt make it 2-5
but i almost made cuz of my drive
have a bitch feel my vibe
ima tell da truth i aint gone lie
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This was a good start for a newb, Work on your Storytelling and flow and stay up man
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Uhm Man This Was A Good Piece I Guess, Lol Structure Was Fucked Though And Leave Your Links To
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-Broken Swordz- , STFu your rap games sucks dick dont call him a newb...
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dude.
this was....whack.
On this site, if you're gonna rap all gankstuh and shit, at least make it funny and clever. otherwise, write about something that means something to you. Everything else comes afterwards.
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-Broken Swordz- , STFu your rap games sucks dick dont call him a newb...
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