Reality vs AL CAPONE

12 lines max due in about 20-30 minutes.. it doesnt matter who drops first either

I'll put a gun to ur mouth and have u screamin mercy/
Kill bitch ass niggas like u who think they can merk me/
Yo im a breath of fresh air and u stink like mornin breath/
Cap-one shot to reality have him thinkin about his death/
I see ur head its round ill turn it into a hemisphere/
I fuck hos u fuck guys so u can call urself a "queer"/
The totality of real things in the world depends of people's knowledge and perception/
Just count tha totality of what hes gon say to be real and ull see he's a deception/
So Reality theres no existence in u cuz u aint an actual being/
Ur imagined and false nature so another loss is what ur seeing/

so far alcpone came hard with that rap if reality dont come hard al comin home with the gold

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lookin no further faggot your finding a loss
you have absolutely no flow cuz like watches with no batteries your timing is off
plus your soft as fuck ..your face? ill leave every part of it bruised
u aint tough u a pussy matter of fact ive seen cotton balls thats harder than you
you get no respect bitch your about as fake as they get
the only thing worse than a dead gangster is a nerd playing one on the net
you fuckin SUCK GEEK YOUR GAY, everything you BUST WEAK THEIR PLAYED
battle me audio or text it doesnt matter...
cause like a transvestite your getting FUCKED EITHER WAY
ill make your scribes recline far..
you aint prepared to face combat in lines g why sparr?
you aint ready cause like capone your gonna die behind "bars"

the only thing that was gay on realitys rap is

you fuckin SUCK GEEK YOUR GAY, everything you BUST WEAK THEIR PLAYED

but that shit was hard
i think its a tie

^^stfu no ones asking you to commentate on my battles faggot

vote

can someone vote plz

ay u will vote when i get about 7 more post i will be back im out

reality one real talk thas who i would vote for if i could aye but al capone you feelin to take me on

i cant vote but reality u won that shit u had more range with ur words
capone u put ur words together well but it was quite basic 2 sentance rhyming

Yo why u sayin u vote for him and then want to battle me? whats wrong wit u?

ill battle either one of yall jus need some battles on my record ya feel

AC- your opener was too simple. your "...queer" bar was pretty played, try to lay off the gay jokes unless they are really good. the breath death rhyme was way to simple. the perception bar was a long bar in a verse of short bars, which was kinda random. then your closer was all philisophical and shit and i just wasnt buying it. all this being said, the lines you said were pretty solid. this was like a C+ because your lack of vocab kills your nice lines.

RE- this is a really nice verse. your first bar had a nice punch, your second bar was a really hard punch, "just played one on the net" was a nice end to that bar, "fucked either way" was nice too. that finisher was just awesome. last nail in the coffin. your punches hit really hard. the flow is off at times, and one gay joke is too many gay jokes, but i liked this overall. This is a B+. Polish the flow and add some multis, and take out the gay joke, and maybe one extra play on words, and this is an A without a doubt.

nice battle for FL, but due to the reasons above...

v/RE

p.s. im outta uppins in my battles in my sig, please hit me back, thanks in advance