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yo rate me real fast
niggaz wanna talk shit/tryin to spit/
till i come out with a new hit/so dont say shit/
i aint new to this/ u throw and miss/im throwin fists/
new kid on da block/got it on lock/before u talk put up ya glock/
fuk it ill be rich someday/if i have to ill use the ak/
so stick to ya guns/ before i squish you like meat between the buns.
that was just a little taste.so rate me.
This Was Basic And Short Which Can Be Worked On
You Need To Be More Deep Than You're Being Because
It All Sounds Simplistik
Anyway I'd Rate This 4/10
You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.
i agree with TeLLaKoNeSiS on a scale
1-10 i would give you a 5 :thumbup:
Man This Was Basic, Short And Needs Quite A Bit Of Work
Elevate...Then Drop Again
yo i appreciate the advice,i havent rapped in 3 years, i used to be better.
i dont know if i could post another freestyle but here goes.
yo my lyrics melt your brain faster than a bullet train/
im lyrically insane, ya life is drained/
nigga read between the line, u cant fuck wit my rymes/
u tryin to act like 50 cent/
wen im done u wont be worth $50 cent/
cant be topped, dropped ,niggaz bout to get popped/
put your gun where your mouth is/more krunk than the south is/
i get high like the mountains/ pussy bleed like fountains/
yea im from the sleepless city/got my whole crew wit me/
its all about the kids flow/next time think before u make my gunz blow/
ohh
rate it aight
yo i dont know how to do the link thing that credz is talking about. can someone help me plzzzzzzzzz.
and rate my last post.
0/10
Just leave the persons name and title of the piece if you dont know how to leave links.
A lot of people must be computer illiterate these days or something.