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K9&Metallica - One
K9 feat Metallica – One
„I can’t remember anything
Can’t tell if this is true or dream
Deep down inside I feel to scream
This terrible silence stops me”
A child sent in the atrocities of war,a pure spirit,
Nightmares of death,singin to me in a pure lyric,
Never once life showin it’s longevity and i fear it,
Trapped in my own captivity, emptiness in my mental cavity
And i hear it…no electivity,only negativity,
Only inactivity,to demise my once superiority
Nobody can hear my restless cries for help,
Can’t move,forsaken,trapped inside myself,
Can’t see,can’t hear,can’t smell,can’t feal,
Trapped in an endless nightmare so,so real,
I squeal to the empyreal god so,so like a true leal,
No answer, no one to appeal,spreadin like cancer,
Emptiness inside me movin without a single peal…
„Now that the war is through with me
I’m waking up I can not see
That there is not much left of me
Nothing is real but pain now”
Buried inside me…myself a livin grave…
Inside me inanity…I rave like a depraved,
Buried in insanity…inside myself i engrave,
With my mind carve in desperation in my own flesh,
For my salvation, I try to dash my mind into ash,
But i crash right back inside myself with no splash,
My childhood moments no longer flash in my head,
Hope fled…I’m just there dead,but livin instead,
I dread life,and………………….plead for death,
Claustrophobic thoughts no longer spread,
Wanderin endlessly inside me,searchin for a key,
To flee me…if I had legs I would run,
if i had sight i would look at the sun,
if i had a voice i would scream so loud,
if i had ears i would listen to any sound….
„Hold my breath as I wish for death
Oh please god,wake me
Now the world is gone I’m just one
Oh god,help me hold my breath as I wish for death
Oh please God help me”
Tired…tired of bein my own friend,my own enemy,
Drowned in misery,not wishin wizardry for help,
Just sweet,sweet death for my own self,
Deathly lost,frozen inside my own jail,
The worst impost,a inescapable livin hell,
In myself I lay…in myslef I’m contained to stay,
In myself to play,in myself to breath,in myself to sit,
In myself to roam,in myself to have a home,
In myself to moan,in myself to see the dawn,
Forbidden pleasure,a forbidden treasure,
In myself to wish it,at the sound of my slow heartbeat,
Forbidden smile, I forgot my own time,
Inside my cage, I don’t know my own age,
No way to count, no way to account an hour,
No way to surmount my fate’s dreadfully power…
…Waderin endlessly inside me,searchin for a key,
To flee me…to escape my deliriously destiny,
Wish I could just say good-bye,
Wish I could just die…
„Darkness imprisoning me
All that I see
Absolute horror
I cannot live
I cannot die
Trapped in myself
Body my holding cell”
all i hear is silence,
in my raged violence,
my body my own asylum,
death take me final(ly),
imprisoned inside my shell,
no reason to live in hell,
i cannot move,
i cannot hear,
i cannot speak,
i cannot see,
agony,misery,endessly,
insanity,ultimate slavery,
a slave to life by machinery,
no where to run,
no where to hide,
no where to go,
the result of war,
inside me i crawl,
i cannot rise,
i cannot fall,
livin without a soul,
fuck you all,
kill me,
release me,
death kiss me!!!
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No surprise here, another il drop. I feel lke u must have really taken sometime to write this one. U really went in depth with the particular person u wre talking about and took the time to express his inner feeling through your vocab and imagery. good Storline too. Anther ill drop by the K9. Keep doing ur thing and of course peepin ur next piece. I was really feeling ur third verse.
Yall quit sleepin on dude................................
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Very emotional i liked it and i like the chorus to it and how creative you went with the style. The concept was cool and your vocab was good even tho some were spelled wrong like if you rushed. Keep at it, this was nice.
Peace.
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thx for the feeds Na and Omnicient.
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You wrote consistantly in this... You clearly have improved since I saw your early pieces. Your vocabulary has improved and so has your flow. You noticably used a lot of multi's which was interesting. This was a good piece though, you conveyed a lot of emotion and clearly worked on this for more than the average. I enjoyed reading this... You should keep this up... There's always more room to improve and you'll be writing excellent pieces soon if you keep it up.
Good luck and thanks for the feedback on "Unseen Insurgent".
Peace
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dat was some deep real deep feelins in dat joint i see how you was doin ya thing wit dat kid dat shit rite there make ya think why you even here da purpose of life is sometimes i think i have no purpose just here to clutta da game real il stuff son you a worthy nigga on da real son
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thx for the feed so far guys.want more,so...uppin again!
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