I Hear em talkin? (diss to mad niggas)

i hear all these niggas talkin..... bout crack/
but what they got to show for ir they lyrics is ass crack/
+lawtown d+, you made 11 posts nate/
i dropped hotter pieces then u ever gun' make/
nigga +bounce+ be closin my hsit fuck em tho/
wnat beef? im down to buck a ho/ lets go
im bk cat, when i +shyne+ i do it +Big+/
aint a nigga i no that wan front in front the cig/
+the kid big+, im sick , but i aint contangeous/
so you dissin me, aint gunna get you higer rated/
when crakk diss, it sound liek i practiced/
really, i dont think none of you niggas match this/
ill kill you, and if you try to get up/
check my +stat$+ nigga, ill ite ya ass up/
the +remains of ya heart+, floorboard in the room/ (gettin at djb)
dry em up, then sell em to +g mmoney+ as shrooms/ haah
i bet you half the cats that post are white and they aint slang/
and they rhyme botu toasters they aint have or they dont bang/
dont believe me? ill meet you anywhea in new york mayne/
wit my niggas bliiiiit, put em shits, in ya brain/
im +Abusive+ but i aint tryi nto preach the rules/ (Abusive diss)
cuz im gangsta (gangsta) and im too cool/
nigga yo ushould know my bulelts hit and dont +bounce+/
what the fuck up? followin the rules now/

yeah
all you rapbattle niggas that be on my dick... damn
wheres all the real niggas?? eyo bounce this is rap nigga, i mfrom the hood nigga how u gun telll me what rap is? haha
wheres new york i nthis bitch holal at me, blood niggas
haha i done disse djb, g money, kid big mad nigga in 1 lil thread haha

pop off nigga








http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176450
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176513

Weak. None of your punches hit, you could have been far more witty and nailed this, instead you went for the generic gangsterisms, mixed with a few weak nameplays.

You need to write less OMs, read more of other people's work, and sharpen your skills. This is not hatred - take it as you wish, but you really need to hone your skills.

- Jek`

its all good, hotter than the shit you spit tho rap is supposed to be gangsta its how we live brookly, bronx, founders of ther rap shit.. all gangsta

The diss to me actualyl got a little laugh out of me. you actually came more decent in here then the rest of your "disses", but it was still shit.. but beefin with you is pointless, most of the kids your dissin are at a whole nother level then you. N if your from the hood, keep your raps in your "hood", if your gonna take them here, follow the rules.

^ well put.... dont no one give a fuck ur from new york...give urself a cookie n shut the fuck up! this was garbage...every single post consist of the same shit..." im from new york" eastside new york.....im glad u know ur address muthafucka, "pop off" "red bandana" well we can tell ur clothin style is plain, everyones name u mentioned in this diss is on a higher level then u .... this tryin to go against the whole rap battles site is ridiculous....ur garbage nigga....this attempted diss proved my point....(UR BOO BOO!)
since ur such a bad ass gangster why aint u in the streets gang banging answer that?? cuz u a fake a fony a bitch...... thats all i need to say im done....this alone shits on ur wack ass rhymes............

your jsu mad i got to you

word @ G money. living in new york doesn 't make your verse good, putting time and effort and spending time elevatin makes your rhymes good. bein in the 'hood' is only giving you the priviledge to say your from the hood, you don 't elevate in rap from where you live.

When I first saw that u mentioned my dawg DJB name in your verse I started to write a battle verse to merk ur ass....Then I thought, what's the fuckin point....Dude ur trash. Like G said, nobody gives a fuck where u from. And It would be a waste of mine or any of those people u mentioned time to even respond to the bs u put up there and called a verse. So I'll leave u with a F U...but have a nice day.

Any Member of H N R, (or any other crew for that matter) would murder u in a battle. Suggestion: leave it alone.

My Grandmother's Urine sample > Da Crackk Don

yo homie you was missing the punchlines,regardliss niggas goin hate but dat was more like a shout-out too them den a battle/diss......try syblimnals and multi's next time.....fuck dat do it again ain't goin do shit but bring ya game up.........on the other hand you gotta wait ya turn too be cocky.....Being from the hood juss give you an edge cuz theres truth in dat....You gotta work fo the other percent

iite good looks

Liek everyone is telling man, your drops are flat, nothing hot about them. I have coem to the conclusion that your are either too young to understand where we are coming from, or you just can not accept the fact that you need to improve. Honestly if you are going to diss me and call it rap, do it in a fucken audio. If you have the balls to talk out your ass, please I invite (no beg) you to drop an audio diss on me. Now that is rap, and you don't have the luxory of hiding behind a fucken screen moving your fingers. You'd have to show skill, so if you want go for it. I really hope you can learn ot see our feed back as a means to elevate. I would like to read soemthing dope from you, and if you really want to improve I'll even set time aside to help man.