WillKill4Money vs Young Manny

aight rules are as follows:

10-15lines
check in asap
drop verse with in an hr of check in
normal battle rules apply

checkin in...

is any one gunna talk? i dont know how to use dis so will someone tell me please

stand witness to the percision of a new type of dissin/
the equalivalent of skill and wizardry in colision/(1)
jus listen as i demonstrate the art and technique/
thats been know to destroy mcs and wreck geeks/(2)
my mystique speech is as jurassic as it gets/
rhymes uncovered im drastic when i hit/(3)
cuz im faster than whats qui wit plasma on my tip/
tounge fried cuz my lyrics are hot, the sum of fire and lava/(4)
invaden dark spaces manny i am your fatha/
dont botha spittin spare your self the lost/(5)
the price of defeat and the embarresment it costs/
im a kamakaze pilot known as the terroristic boss/(6)
shown i condone in unjustified killing/
and im prone ta be flown into your building/(7)
death comes as a price so face defeat in a hearse/
even you wait ta reciet ta be feedin off my verse/(8)
it seems you talk the balk but can step ta step/
how you suppose ta spin the boss you aint got a record yet/(9)
in battles i roast you like roach o's im smokin dope/
beat me, how you suppose to you aint even got enough post ta vote/(10)
rhymes come designed ta slide lines come wreckin ya shelf/
heres some adive you might wanna invest in for help/(11)
take this loss and start another profile b4 you get ahead of your self/
punchlines fry your mind while im protected in stealth/(12)
i detected youd melt when i spit these lyrics in flame/
qiuk nows your chance run b4 sum1 heres of your name/(13)
and theres no escape from what your future holds/
cuz your schemes played even what you got new is old/(14)
but me i spit it right im known for havin a nice page/
son freeze like the real manny in ice age/(15)


drop ya shit

Yo ya boy M-80 bout to eat this dude up so lets go right now!

jus write your 10-15 lines of a verse against me in you reply box

say checkin in b4 you spit

you have 1hr from than to drop your verse

spit your shit asap

Nigga young Manny you don't wanna fuck wit me(1)
you kill niggas for money I kill niggas for free(2)
I'll cock the baga the mac 10 have yo ass dointh machurana(3)
Nigga fuck yo rage I got a loaded 12 guage(4)
I'll steal yo mama's acura wrecked it and sold it back to ya(5)
I'll put bullets in yo Mercury cougar I got a P-90 wit more body than Lex Luger(6)I'm from a place where there aint no such thing as friends(7)
Niggas rollin around in a stolen Benz(8)
Fuck this I don't read the Qu'arn I'm comin from the under ground like I'm Sadamm(9)I'll cut you up cause been tight and you been white(10)My crew will put a pen stripe across yo winde pipe(11)Now I'll make you a believer got more ice on my wrist than you got in yo frezzer(12)I'll pull out a tre pound bustin wit A-town(13)Yo ass betta stay down yo bitch givin more rides than Greyhound(14)

Aint go t nothin to say?What"s up my nigga where you at Black?

what are you talkin about man...i dropped and you dropped now we gotta get votes...

uppin(1)

willkill4money u wrote 15 barz not 15 lines
but anyways here's the breakdown
willkill:
ur drop was nice it had a few nice punches, and ur vocabulary was ok too.but it seemed as if most of ur verse u were talkin about urself. not good. u had a nice flow and ur structure was nice.

young manny:
u need work. first of all, u lacked punchez, half of ur shyt didn't rhyme, ur structure was ok but put the words that rhyme on the end on the line. u had no vocabulary u need to elevate.

v/willkill4money

Well, I dunno...

Weird battle to judge.

What I see looks like a couple of pre-writes with the names thrown in to make it look personal...

Only WillKill actually hit cuz he threw in his record (his lack of one) and his inability to vote cuz of lack of posts.

Both those were actual hits, even though you kinda shied away fromany wordplay or finesse...just spit in statement form.

That and because WillKill threw double the amount...I dunno why Manny didn't match the muscle Will came with...he posted first, Manny coulda.

WillKill wins.

Peace

-HOLDUP!-

FIRST OFF - YOUNG MANNY I HATE TO BLOW UP YOUR SPOT SON, I REALLY DO, BUT BITING LINES FOROM EMINEM AINT GONNA WIN YOU A BATTLE...quote,"I'll steal yo mama's acura wrecked it and sold it back to ya"(5 end quote...eminem said that in a song he did and i know you know. work on making your own shit, develop your own style. you'll get better with time you just have to practice, pick up on the little things, pay attention to everything you hear. because of this and the fact that WILL KILL's verse was better structured and better anyway he gets my vote. dont penalize him on this, he'll learn everyone, just like most of us have.

vote - Willkill4money

::RETURN THE FAVOR AND VOTE ON ONE OF MY BATTLES::

Young Many loses for biting I'll steal yo mama's acura wrecked it and sold it back to ya(5)

closed.. good looks Komatose, if you didnt say that in your vote i wouldve never known