Holo-Costs

Walking with the Reb, all they see is the ear-locks,
Talking on the Web, all they know is to fear-knocks,

This is my way, sight the changes in personalities,
Semitist by day, night brings ranges of casualties,

Then one day I was fed up and wanted something new,
So I fused the two and came out with JamMasterJew,

This biological monstrosity, fooled the rule books as you will see,
Brings nothing but Tragedy, Atrocity, and uncharacteristic Animosity,

Suddenly, people started to notice the dissapearance of the Pleasantry,
This lyrical Blasphemy, wiped out all at Terminal Velocity,

Unbeknowst of what awaits thee, I challenge the Underground World of R&B,
My lyrics have such Ferocity they shake the foundations from right under me,

So now I be, halfway to fates doorstep under the sea,
Flying solo via Israeli Delivery, I arrive at half past sabbath (6:33),

I open the door, My breath quickens at what I see,
A reflection of a Torah being held by me,

Suddenly, my world comes crashing down around me,
I ain't no G, i'm simply a Lamb on the wrong path who can finally see,

I realize, the significance of the image I just saw,
I decide no more lies....I go home and put on my Yamacha


Some people were wondering where JamMasterJew came from, so I decided to give the story a telling....Tell me what you think

ay don 't forget your links or this 'll just end up getting closed later. but ok, your multis in here were very good, it supported your flow alot, and i was liking that, but at some points your multis seemed forced and it made it kinda hard to understand that line. i wasn 't liking the spaces between every 2 lines, but other then that your structure was pretty decent. i noticed a few stretched lines every here and there but it 's all good. but i dunno, this topic isnt really "my thing", but i enjoyed readin it despite the few things i mentioned. good drop!

thanks yo....any more feedback is appreciated

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Originally Posted by JamMasterJew

thanks yo....any more feedback is appreciated

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Yo u rap the same thing as the next guy
U smoke weed, tote nines
And u A jail bird that ain't learn how to fly
But yo it's kind of sad when i'm listeinin'
All yo disses is subliminal
THe real shit u only whispering
So if u going to step to the plate
Step to it like a man
And not like a premature baby that can fit in the palm of my hand

Holla Back Nigga!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

All Ylls Rhymes Is Weak Someone Battle Me And See What Goes Down!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Qa_6 quit posting that bullshit in everyones open mic thread, go battle somone or something.

N Dark Phantom, go to bitchslapped in frontlines, open mic isn 't where you ask for battles.

up^^^

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

sorry i did not know this before...