SinAmen vs. Urban Warrior

"set it up you fucking pig"

^ Sure.

1. 10 lines
2. Due ASAP.
3. Fuck You. You Spit First.
4. House Rules.
5. Good Luck. :laugh:

lol ok check...............

you couldnt deliver text....if your letters were mailed to us
your easy murked on my main account...so il smash you on my alias
this is the biggest singular murkage since the battle of the somme
since rapbattles is full man... go back to wack.com
suckin my cock....nah kid your gettin throat-fucked
if you dont believe in oral sex...jus keep your mouth shut
your like a bogged down landrover...kid your stuck in a rut
your like prostate cancer...the way your ride genocides nuts
your the super-mod of your wack site...but if the truths told see
the only reason you made it...is cuz you cant handle RB


waiting...............

still waiting........... thought it was A.S.A.P ?

Aight MC Heartless. Time to finally settle this.

All of you stand back and watch as I easily tear this heartless fag
And what he means by missing heart is the way he decides to rap.
He thinks his personals are phat when they're played n pre-written
And its funny he put his verse in bold to make it not look bitten.
You've gotta be kiddin... Stole Gen's diss and posted on my site?
So I challenged his faggot ass crew, then he left TO JOIN MINE.
Cant even rhyme... Every1 knows his dopeness aint been met
But damn your verse is the bomb.... Cuz its always all threats.
So let me lay down this bet, everything he said was lie kay?
Cuz your at the end of the weak, and I aint talkin bout friday.

Pz.

Sin used a played closer... tsk tsk.
I've used that concept myself.
Anyway...
U.W. had a surprisingly good verse for a newbie.
I liked it and it caught me off guard.
Sin just came more personal tho, biting personals, crew personals...
War is just not touching on that.

Vote: Sin
Amen.

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U.W:
Flow-7/10
Punches-6/10
Personals-7/10
Structure-5/10
Metas-5/10

You came Ok, but u had some good lines dont get me wrong, juss come a lil harder

Syn:
Flow-8/10
Punches-7/10
Personals-7/10
Structure-8/10
Metas-7/10

You came ight, i know u coulda dun betta, but ur verse was good enuf to win this battle :thumbup:

V/ Synamen

ima just leave some feed

you couldnt deliver text....if your letters were mailed to us
your easy murked on my main account...so il smash you on my alias
1st nice,2nd meh
this is the biggest singular murkage since the battle of the somme
since rapbattles is full man... go back to wack.com
decent
suckin my cock....nah kid your gettin throat-fucked
if you dont believe in oral sex...jus keep your mouth shut
ight
your like a bogged down landrover...kid your stuck in a rut
your like prostate cancer...the way your ride genocides nuts
good, even tho played
your the super-mod of your wack site...but if the truths told see
the only reason you made it...is cuz you cant handle RB
he didnt make it.. but ight

All of you stand back and watch as I easily tear this heartless fag
And what he means by missing heart is the way he decides to rap.
ok opener, could of been harder
He thinks his personals are phat when they're played n pre-written
And its funny he put his verse in bold to make it not look bitten.
decent.. but i mean what makes u think there pre-written and he bites o_O
You've gotta be kiddin... Stole Gen's diss and posted on my site?
So I challenged his faggot ass crew, then he left TO JOIN MINE.
i dunno if he stole that line, but anyhow i aint seen it, and he didnt really want to join our crew..i told him to join
Cant even rhyme... Every1 knows his dopeness aint been met
But damn your verse is the bomb.... Cuz its always all threats.
good
So let me lay down this bet, everything he said was lie kay?
Cuz your at the end of the weak, and I aint talkin bout friday.
LOL nice

Quotables:

suckin my cock....nah kid your gettin throat-fucked
if you dont believe in oral sex...jus keep your mouth shut
your like a bogged down landrover...kid your stuck in a rut
your like prostate cancer...the way your ride genocides nuts

vs

Cant even rhyme... Every1 knows his dopeness aint been met
But damn your verse is the bomb.... Cuz its always all threats.
So let me lay down this bet, everything he said was lie kay?
Cuz your at the end of the weak, and I aint talkin bout friday.


this battle was kinda weak i felt in the aspect of u guys used personals that were bullshit.......
out of the quotables i quoted... the harder ones were from sinamen, but the personal one came from mc.. both of yall had up and down barz.. 1 nice line one weaker line...

i'd prolly vote for sinamen for his last 2 barz.. they were good..

1

Yes, he does bite.

Check that battle on the site he claims that I own.

He stole a line from Genocide that was spit against Mr. Key.

:thumbup:

uppin this

i stole fuck all you cunt..........

up 1#.........
some honest votes up in here

so ur sayin that u did bite lyrics from others

no did i say that you retard ?
ive never stole/bitten anything ever !

up2#

Urban Warrior:
you couldnt deliver text....if your letters were mailed to us
(Could have been worded betta but still a played concept)
your easy murked on my main account...so il smash you on my alias
(IIght Second Line)
this is the biggest singular murkage since the battle of the somme
(Didnt Understand the last word.....Is It Even A Word?)
since rapbattles is full man... go back to wack.com
(IIght but Weak)
suckin my cock....nah kid your gettin throat-fucked
(Its very homo to tell a nigga to suck ya dick....sorry)
if you dont believe in oral sex...jus keep your mouth shut
(Good Line But Still Homo)
your like a bogged down landrover...kid your stuck in a rut
(Good Line)
your like prostate cancer...the way your ride genocides nuts
(Dont kno what to say its a good line and i kno Mr.Key shit is hot but its not good to bite so iono what to say bout this line if you did you did if you didnt you didnt...who gives a fuck ya kno)
your the super-mod of your wack site...but if the truths told see
(Eh)
the only reason you made it...is cuz you cant handle RB
(Weak Closer)

Sinamen:
All of you stand back and watch as I easily tear this heartless fag
(Good Opener)
And what he means by missing heart is the way he decides to rap.
(Iono how you could have said this to make it rhyme....Bad Line)
He thinks his personals are phat when they're played n pre-written
And its funny he put his verse in bold to make it not look bitten.
(Good)
You've gotta be kiddin... Stole Gen's diss and posted on my site?
So I challenged his faggot ass crew, then he left TO JOIN MINE.
(Very Good Personal/Punch wuteva the fuck it was...lol)
Cant even rhyme... Every1 knows his dopeness aint been met
But damn your verse is the bomb.... Cuz its always all threats.
(Good Punch)
So let me lay down this bet, everything he said was lies kay?
Cuz your at the end of the weak, and I aint talkin bout friday.
(Good Closer dont really care if this concept if play cuz i've neva heard this one)

U.W. ya verse was predominently weak but it was a plus for a newb cuz i've seen a lot worst i dont wanna say any names ::Coughs "Ethnic":: ::Coughs Again::
your rhyme scheme was good it was a weak verse and plus with the rumors of you bitten it didnt make it look good especially when he put it in his verse...but overall you did good

Sinamen your verse had good personals punches and structure you jus lost me at the beginning with the last words of the first to bars but everything else was good you kept it simple and consistant good job

v/goes to Sinamen

please..............if you do not understand what " the somme " was..............do not vote..........up3.........

Uppin. Leave links and I'll get you back with a completely honest vote.