Solving Our Issues - Feat. AbusivE

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=175849
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...41#post2145941

AbusivE
Credz

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Haha..
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Nova coming decent?...Fuck thats just something impossible
Cause he avoids battles and all...but yet his sticks to topicals
Toss the fag some obstacles, Maybe this will overcome ya fear
Rookie, fuck ya style... try elevatin n come back in a few years
Ya got weak peices like, 'Tears of the Blind' and 'Evil in His Eyes'
then some other wack open mic, that only got three replies!
Kid... Don 't even try; Cause my punches will leave ya 'blind'
It wont matter tho, since half of ya open mics are about the human eye!
Faggot, Just keep your mouth shut, ya already got banned for bitchin
You 'd still be at the bottom, if it werent for corrupted visions
You have no fans; Steppin to battles, the kid 'll never stand
Callin him self a man, but check his sig
..........................................He's begging to be unbanned!
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Fucking Bitch
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Dude being whack is all that you are and being Ill your just far from...
Cause without me ya existence wouldnt be born with ya semi stardom...
And what I hear from FanTa you never were hard son...Just a bitch!...
No wonder ya scared to battle, fearing smeared make up with a busted lip...
Damn Racist Prick, Who in their right mind would even face this dick!?...
When all he does is spit whack, Only dropping hard when he takes a shit...
Wont hit ya in the face, ya sissy, just in the body to seperate ya shoulder blades...
Dont worry, the pain will stop..when we get the admins to unban novacain...
Fuck man...I can come played and over used..but still spit better than you...
Cause Im here all night cracking punch lines...kinda like Letterman dude...


Just something we wrote up in like 15 mins.

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Originally Posted by Credz

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=175849
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...41#post2145941

AbusivE
Credz

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.
.
.
.
.
.
Haha..
.
.
Nova coming decent?...Fuck thats just something impossible
Cause he avoids battles and all...but yet his sticks to topicals
Toss the fag some obstacles, Maybe this will overcome ya fear
Rookie, fuck ya style... try elevatin n come back in a few years
Ya got weak peices like, 'Tears of the Blind' and 'Evil in His Eyes'
then some other wack open mic, that only got three replies!
Kid... Don 't even try; Cause my punches will leave ya 'blind'
It wont matter tho, since half of ya open mics are about the human eye!
Faggot, Just keep your mouth shut, ya already got banned for bitchin
You 'd still be at the bottom, if it werent for corrupted visions
You have no fans; Steppin to battles, the kid 'll never stand
Callin him self a man, but check his sig
..........................................He's begging to be unbanned!
..
Fucking Bitch
..
Dude being whack is all that you are and being Ill your just far from...
Cause without me ya existence wouldnt be born with ya semi stardom...
And what I hear from FanTa you never were hard son...Just a bitch!...
No wonder ya scared to battle, fearing smeared make up with a busted lip...
Damn Racist Prick, Who in their right mind would even face this dick!?...
When all he does is spit whack, Only dropping hard when he takes a shit...
Wont hit ya in the face, ya sissy, just in the body to seperate ya shoulder blades...
Dont worry, the pain will stop..when we get the admins to unban novacain...
Fuck man...I can come played and over used..but still spit better than you...
Cause Im here all night cracking punch lines...kinda like Letterman dude...


Just something we wrote up in like 15 mins.

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yo, this is a little good, got some good rhymes... but you guys need to do a serious battle; PROTO, ASAP

upppin... drop links n i 'll return the favor

this was koo


You have no fans; Steppin to battles, the kid 'll never stand
Callin him self a man, but check his sig
..........................................He's begging to be unbanned!
(loved this verse it hit hard and was funny as hell)


Dont worry, the pain will stop..when we get the admins to unban novacain(this was a koo lil verse)

ay overall this was a pretty koo verse
i would give it between a 7 1/2 to a 8


if u could i have two keystyles
hospitilized and urban legends
could i get some feed

and 1 battle if u could vote me vs madrap

Lol at this...

First off why the sudden animosity towards me? I think I know why...

Abusive...
You came nicest, you used things about me against me. Such as my topics and whatever,
yet i never got banned for bitching, I got banned for spamming. Something which even a supermod accepts was wrong, but I accept the punishment so oh well.
overall, 7/10

Credz...
I thought you weren't supposed to have beef with members?
Wasnt that what you were saying when you wanted to ghostwrite for me?
Oh well, never mind... You're verse was decent, but it was a battle verse not a diss really. Yet you cant understand that... You write about busting my lip and just use punch lines which really could be about anybody, but Abusive came at ME with things that actually could affect me.
overall 3/10

Sooo, are you guys done?

Abusive - Came at him with names of his pieces, the topics, and his current sig. You used a lot of your resources. Had good flow, and bustin on stuff personal to him, kept it from being played.
Credz - I thought the lines were longer than they needed to be. Had a personal on his name, some alright concepts. Not bad for a quick battle type verse.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=175493

like i said just something quick sir. :)

return the feeback:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...06#post2145806

[fogot it the 1st time]

Wont hit ya in the face, ya sissy, just in the body to seperate ya shoulder blades...
Dont worry, the pain will stop..when we get the admins to unban novacain...


that was dope...

easily the best line in here....

and credz you didnt do bad... I'd give it a 6/10.

Thanks for the feed y 'all.. drop some links n i 'll return the favor

this shit was dope... very good

rtn the fb:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=175933

The novicain line was the best even though it's played. Not many standout lines. Averagish type stuff. Keep writing.

My Open Mic: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=175565

upppin... leave links

i like it there are some very unique lines in this