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Accidents happen when you entangled in false rapp'n,
Battln cannaballistic statures, aint digg'n u actorz,
I been bombn sites, b4 the invention of shrapnel,
Destryoing all competition wit exquizite spits thats sick
Extremist, activist in rappn, backlashing faggits,
skirmish kids, nervous I could feel ya gasp'n,
You'll neva murda a track, join'n skill'd assasins,
My actions reak havoc amongst the masses,
N my styles like MTV cuz I punk'd yall asses,
exterminatn perpatrators, wit a murderous sentiment,
ya rymes mo' sweet'a than, burries-n-cinn'am'N,
contemplation of fight'n back, betta not cross ya mindz,
call me a fisher man the way I toss ya lines,
sever ya neck from ya spine, only time you'll ever be ahead of
mines(minds)
come across as wack with troublesome problems,
i got mind bogglers for groupies, wont U swallow A little,
fruity nicca, wont ya follw a skittle,
enigma of elements, I seen knowledge abliss,
yall could neva beat me in a battle, poundn ya fists,
definition of a disbeliever, fanatic of falsehood,
I got U wearing different color hoodies, sayin you so hood
my bars gotta bang'n sound like thump'n hammers,
only time ya shit be hard, is when it bust through pampers...... :banghead:

gedd@me :shoot: KALIKOZE9/11...... :shoot:


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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...38#post2140238
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...59#post2140359

yo dis pretty hott im feelin all those multies u used i like the flo it sounds like u put sum emotion in it keep workin on it

ayo i appreciate the feedback, i did work on it alittle bit, im tryna up my vocab...
thanks....
Ill rtrn the fav. holla


:shoot:KALIKOZE9/11:shoot:

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...51#post2140151
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yo, i saw some emotion in there n i was feeling da multies flo was kewl, i think u could possible make dis longa too

peace out