Gedd@me.............

My free flow form will leave you faggitz Flabbergasted,
my raps crafted the beat-n-stabbed it,
it's a tragic happen'n produced by benevolent Ravages,
I bug out an scatter Elements of ya fractured sediment,
allover the HOODz regiment, I been a threat,
Since I left the prophetic prophets in the projects,
stuck wit prostetic objects, yall popp'n a pistols perposterous,
I'm the product prophecy, propos'n propoganda,
my spits precise, an I promise to pop ya bandana,
practice pressure against pussies, and play the parasite of plagues,
enough bars to quench ya thirst, like a glass of lemonade,
I party wit people who pluck pigeons, an package'em in parcels,
get drunk and fall offa the barstool,
pack heaters cuz I know wut bare arms do,
get busy an brawl cuz bitches be beast'n on ballaz,
bombard'n barricades on bastardz, defeat'n'em flawless,
I know I need to stop it, if you holdn a mic drop it,
an practice playa,
becuz I put red pinpoint precision dots on peoples parkaz,
I'm packn a parade of angry pessimists,
to paralyze da paradox of a persons proximity,
persue prenups cuz my spits placed parted pieces,
in picture perfect piles of preejaculated fetus, an you the SEMEN,
persuasion of presidence in pestillance,
preach'n passive progressions, plaster paper wit prejudice,
an position proper predicates for perfected spits,
bitch ya purse'll get picked, ya verse has been shit,
just wonder why I hold the mic wit a perpendicular grip,
my inks trouble like writ'n bad checks,
I sever heads from necks, sorta like carv'n out pumpkins,
this aint MTV but yall still can get punked kidd.


gedd@me.......... FAGGITZ
:shoot: KALIKOZE9/11 :shoot:

LINKS I POSTED ON
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...47#post2105247
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...28#post2105428


I'M PATIENTLY WAIT'N 4 A FAGGIT 2 SHIT-ON........ :thefinger

shit was cool, but damn its like reading a riddle, space it out more..but the rhymes are cool.

Thanks. I Was Pretty Much Tryna Grasp The Riddle Tongue Twista Shit, Just Go Crazy. But Good Lookn Tho'. Holla

You stuck with the alliteration style throughout. It worked in some spots, others went far off topic. Watch out for stretched lines. It's an interesting style.

IIGHT....

I CHECKED YA BATTLE........DAWG, THAT CAT CHEDDA BOX IS STR8 GARBAGE.

BUT IT WAS A GOOD DROP. ILL HOLLA.

gedd@me...............1
:shoot: KALIKOZE9/11 :shoot:

I was feelin this shit...You gotta nice way wit using alliterations...structure was good...you had a strong vocab. I wanna see more from you, fam. Thx for reppin my OM

-One

good look'n, Seminole,... nice to see my shit caught someone's attention.

appreciate the feed back, I'll be poostn some shit fa' cats in a minute, peep it n holla.
O, aint nuffn, I give props when its due.----------wunn----------------


:shoot:KALIKOZE911:shoot:

good shit nice flow and lots of P, PP's everywhere..hahaha. I would say more but these guys above said it all already. Keep droppin, but remember to reply on other peoples threads to get this open mic rollin..not that your not, i'm just sayin.

Return the favor with some of your own comments on my thread
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...24#post2129224

This would probably sound good on audio, it has a good flow to it, and your alliteration would sound nice. You had some alright concepts. Keep writing and you'll be able to better express what you intended for your verses.
Thanks for hittin up my om

a crazy cool lets battle

whats up is you gone battle me

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good shit nice flow and lots of P, PP's everywhere..hahaha. I would say more but these guys above said it all already. Keep droppin, but remember to reply on other peoples threads to get this open mic rollin..not that your not, i'm just sayin.

Return the favor with some of your own comments on my thread
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...24#post2129224

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THANKS APPRECIATE THE FEEDBACK.....i WAS INTERESTED IN THE IDEA, OF ALL THE WORDS THAT START WIT 'P', SO I JUST WENT FROM THRR.....

SOME MORE WORK: OLD BUT I THINK STILL HOTT F/B PLZ.
HOLLA WILL RETURN THE FAV.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=154149

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Originally Posted by Lil mizzle

a crazy cool lets battle

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WANNA BATTLE ME..............

SET-IT-UP......n.....im.....me

:shoot:KALIKOZE9/11:shoot:

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Originally Posted by Lil mizzle

whats up is you gone battle me

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THIS AINT A BATTLE THREAD POST YA BATTLE CALL OUT SOMEWHERE ELSE------------------1


OR GEDD@ME