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Hip-Hop is Dead
Hip-Hop is dead........the wise head said adjusting his dial
Turned it off, grabbed his ILLmatic CD......cracked a smile
Reminisced of past classics, cringed at the current delusion
Of the masses, confusin hip-hop's passing with evolution
Commercial driven distribution of works devoid of spirit
Stereotypical instrumentals drowned with shallow lyrics
Frauds with facades, posing as pioneers of a Lost Art
Ignorant of it's history, to preoccupied with pop charts
And vivid depictions of fiction...........Urbanized warfare
Disrespecting our women, the paraphernalia the wear,
Seems silly and raises a query..............tragicaly derived
...................WHERE WERE YOU THE DAY HIP-HOP DIED?
True a select few display breif resemblances of the past
But the majority unfortunatly often fall short of that class
Am I perverse if a verse from FIFTY don't really move me?
If I fail to concive the creativity in the use of an oozie?
If i'm uninspired by their tired rants of jewels n iced pendants?
Rather be percived as God's Grandson, Nasir Jones descendant
18th Letter advocate..................unfinished Rakim apprentice
Golden Age diciple.......well-learned observer of the vintage
Tracks that so many so called fans misidentify as wack
................Playin my part to bring TRUE HIP-HOP back
I will post the feedback threds in a minute Credz.
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nice work very impressive story line
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flow was perfect , i loved the concept and message behind it. the multies werre nicely set up
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damn son that was one of the hottest verses I read on here in a minute. I got the same opinion, but you put that into rhymes perfect. Good multies and vocab. Mad props
peep mine if u can:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=174281
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^thanx for the feedback.............el bumpo
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This was a nice verse really good topic everything you said in the verse id agree with.
The structure and vocab were fine your flow is nice so overall i got nothing to hate on.
Return the favour.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=174166
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**whistles**
an old concept but it still rings true, good vocab and some real witty lines "God's grandson" in particular stood out for me. some good imagery as well, a few multi-esque lines, a few more wouldn't hurt but this a good piece even without them.
keep on posting man. H'n'R.
p.s. reckon you could rep my latest drop? people are walking around with blinkers on in open mic, i swear.
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thanks fam, no prob I got u....uppin
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this bump brought to u from na-ledge aka mc slept on... hows bout some feedback
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Pretty freaking Good....
"True a select few display breif resemblances of the past
But the majority unfortunatly often fall short of that class"
^ So true..so true..
Am I perverse if a verse from FIFTY don't really move me?
If I fail to concive the creativity in the use of an oozie?
^ Damn bringing out a great point here...
If i'm uninspired by their tired rants of jewels n iced pendants?
Rather be percived as God's Grandson, Nasir Jones descendant
18th Letter advocate..................unfinished Rakim apprentice..
^ These lines stood out the most...
Golden Age diciple.......well-learned observer of the vintage
Tracks that so many so called fans misidentify as wack..
Another good point brought out..
................Playin my part to bring TRUE HIP-HOP back"
Overall very nice very nice piece,..
filled with very good examples of why
HIP HOP IS DEAD...
keep these drops coming....oh yes
the flow was very good as well and
your structure was good. Vocabulary
you used good words to help bring
out what you wanted to say...
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dude that was good Na Ledge
Lines that were nice:
Am I perverse if a verse from FIFTY don't really move me?
If I fail to concive the creativity in the use of an oozie?
18th Letter advocate..................unfinished Rakim apprentice
Golden Age diciple.......well-learned observer of the vintage
Commercial driven distribution of works devoid of spirit
Stereotypical instrumentals drowned with shallow lyrics
u had some really good line
keep it up
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