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So Odd
Im up in court once again so i gotta execute the snitches
Im poisioning priests and raping nuns with their crucifixes
People have this crazy idea that im so odd and crazy
Like christians seeing jesus getting a blow job from mary
Yeah yeah yeah you may feel im sick in the head
Im making a porno and i got a dead bitch in my bed
I cant perform cause i got maggots crawling on my foreskin
I murdered my whole family last night its morning now more sin
Im in the pub i go up to the bar to get the beer in
The barmaid was wearing aborted babies as ear rings
The walls were covered in pictures of murder scenes
I could smell the blood and i swear i heared the screams
You think your safe? but maybe i'll find ya
Your rhymes are more rancid than an old ladies vagina
Now find another thug who holds this mind state
The mortician has just grabbed me i aint told this rhyme, waiiiiiitttttttttttttt
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fuuuuuuuuuuuucking hell, this was twisted. crazy concept, good multis and shocking but well described imagery. i can't imagine what mood you were in when you penned this monster. i like some originality man, theres little enough as it is in open mic. my only complaint is that it ended too soon.
keep up the good work.
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was nice... i liked the twizted shit... nice mutlies... it all flowed well all arounds decent. right of the start you had the morbid mindset which was nice. i liked reading this shit.
keep it up.
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this was very sick and disturbing. some of the lines were aight. some stuff i never heard before and i gotta give you some props for that. i didnt really feel the multi's it was ok but nothing outstanding. i wish it was longer with more content and maybe a story line but this was ok.
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nICE FLOW, I CAN TELL YOUR LYRICAL, BUT I JUST THINK THE RYHME HAS SHOCK VALUE...BUT IT'S NO DOUBT YOU GOT FLOW
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Thank for the feed i wasnt gonna put this verse up im working on some dope shit right now so i thought id post this up just to get some feed on it cause i might write another 2 verses in this style.
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not 2 bad.. pretty nice shit yo :D
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Yeh nice man even tho it was a little disturbing. Some lines were definetly attention seeking like the ones about Bible characters which I found a little crude but everyone has their own style and voice to express their thoughts in. But over all it was good.
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That was pretty tight man, I liked your punchlines,and it flows right, i think towards the end you dropped off a little though.
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damn love ya imagination , kinda scares me tho lol
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This was nice, some was played but some was pretty fresh. The crazy/Mary rhyme doesn't cut it, lose those in future. The aborted baby ear rings was fucking dope, if you don't listen to Cage already (which I get the idea you do, infact he might have inspired this), you should. The only other thing is at times you seemed to be trying TOO HARD to be sickening and that's not a good look.. at has to come natural. If you're a horrorcore fan you should check my friend 9thCell over at www.b-boys.com He's certainly THE sickest there is as far as text writing goes. Peace
