Everlast

(Silence)

Never Thought That It Would Come To This, Bullets And Blunt Tips.
If Death Never Would Come Then Life Could Fully Run It's Gift.
It's Hard To Stay Alive Especially When The Beef Is Postal.
I'm Like A Renegade, Kill Em And Hit Streets Coastal.

(Beat Drops)

I'm Death In It's True Self, The Belt Holder.
Pet Smolderer, Even Rap Itself Have Vet Soldiers.
Birthed To Curse Worser Emcees, It's Impossible.
Unstoppable To Toppable Candidates, Beef Is Probable.
Haters Disregard My Style, I'm In The Club On My Floor. (Come Get Some)
Got My Clan Stickin Up People To Give An Encore. (You Want None)
SYKE, Never That With Twin Gunners I Bust Back.
At Any Organization That Thinks My Stuff's Wack.

(Pause)

Spit Flows Like Kin Folk, I Spin Hoax And Split Yoke Like Tin Spokes.

Vertex, Known To Merk Text, Let Alone Mic Vex, Devour Any Emcee Who Insight Next.


Links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...91#post2112891
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...98#post2112898

Shiiit thats sum nice shit... when i was readin that man i could just hear it in my head like it was actually playin there man... u layed it down good there man i gotta giv u that... i dont think i really hav ne critisizm 4 this 1 bcuz it was very well done but u cant tell me that that was off the top o ur head... prolly took u a while eh? aight well good job man 9.5/10... very nice very nice... keep at it man

Took No Less Than 10 Minutes.
I Appreciate The Feedback, Fam.


^ Up.

Good flow.
nice rhythem......pretty hott peace for a quickie......
Ya got talent...peace!


~man im drunk~

was short, but it had a good flow... multis were there, emotion could have been stronger... try makin it longer and get more creative with the topic...but it was a decent drop, keep at it

Pretty dope dawg, keep it up. Your rhymes were ill! I havent read something like that for along time. Your structure was aight, you coulda done alittle better, everything else is locked on and focused! Nice job. 8/10

Appreciate The Feedback.

when i saw ur name i thought this was gonna suck lol. but look at my name:)
anyways, i thought that this was excellent. you used a wide vocabulary and still incorporated good flow. i think this would sound great as an audio track. keep it up.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=174390

Thanks.


^ UP.

YEAH, YO THIS WAS A HOTT PIECE,

FA' A 10 MINUTE WRIT, NICE MULTIES, FLOWED WELL.

GIVE A HOLLA, :shoot:KALIKOZE9/11:shoot: