rhyme attack

my rhyme attack will crack ya back outtta whack
ya try ta get away but i dont give no slack
im a rhyming monsta like gozilla wit a pad and a pen
copying others styles is just a straight up sin
my style is all unique like snowflakes
my flow is sweeter than the syrup that you put on pancakes
the rhyme is fuller than a fresh new can of mace
your rhyme is emptier than a handicapped parking place
im know as the artist cuz i can create the flow how i choose
if i battle u dont even have one thought that you will lose
cuz i feed off your negative energy like a leech
you might as well be a mute cuz i cant hear yo speech
i only listen to greatness so its best get some practice
if i was a code not even the architect couldnt crack this :thumbup:

you are whack try doing some double word rhymes because single is whack as fuck

seems like you wanna battle

you suck ass nikka

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

started with some forced multis, then u used some played concepts =\.. your structure was ok, but some lines seemed a little stretched.. but try not to use those played concepts and try writin to a dif. topic, or go battle or something...

This was pretty poor the structure was ok but your flow and vocab needs a lot of work.
That snowflake line just didnt make sense and that pancake line was played out.
Just keep writing and you should improve try not to make your rhymes so corny.

Return the favour.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=173174