Da Neph vs Ethnic's mark-ass

Aight

5 barz min
due tomarrow midnight
do how ya pleaz,

I'ma murk ya son

so luck for you fucker you really need it..................

now its start..................
This Sherton bitch ass get fuck his sister,
in this battle i gonna twist her, hurry up now came blizzerd......
Ethnic says true of this fucker,rap so bad that embarrassed her country,
go out her house,dont know how whash laundry.
Nephew has just white ass with no cash,
where she live,in trash can,and die for my hand.
i spit this shit and gonna now bet her easy,
like d-dwissy(D12) get their band fat Bizzy.(Bizarre)
or she choking, everybody joking,shes rhymes meen nothing.

Mothafucka bout to get thrown off tha 'east side' tha bridge/
homocide or possibly suicide as he jumps away off tha ridge//1
East side is tha way bitches ride wit them good 'ol clitoris's/
Go 'head an' hide cause I take much bliss in killing me a miss//2
An' don't forget to shave, bitch, ya better behave for pappy/
Can NOT look all nappy when around pappy or I'll get slappy//3
You a average nigga that shoulda never tried to ever rap-n-cap/
Watch ya wrap ya self up bein' nothin but a bunch of pap-pap//4
Realize Neph dont fuck wit marks who get it in tha ass at tha park/
Have ya left six foot cause bitches be bitches at tha end tha stark//5

5 barz on a bitch nigga

uppin numero uno niggyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

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ethnic, ya flow was ok but some of ya punchlines??????
not bad there but i've seen better

nephew, ya flow was tight, ya punchlines made sense and overall i think ya did better
than ethnic, sorry dawg

vote-nephew j

up number four here, to bad ol' boys vote don't count cause he only got ten posts on this site

blah @ this battle.

East side is tha way bitches ride wit them good 'ol clitoris's/
Go 'head an' hide cause I take much bliss in killing me a miss

vs.

nothing.


Ethnic, your verse was weak.. you didn't have any good punches. The structure and flow was inconsistent and the wording was pretty choppy too. Work on your concepts and punches.. elevate.

Nephew J, your verse was weak too, honestly.. your verse had too many violence threats and punches.. you were lacking wittiness and creativity.. your flow and structure was better though, which is why you take this battle really.. even the punch I quoted wasn't even good.. to be honest. Just work on your concepts and try to come wittier next time..


v/ Nephew J

newphew i think you took it this one........................

um this battle was wack, hell yeah blah at this thing,
um i think both of you diserve a loss......
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ethnic, no good punches, no rhyme technic,
same with newphew j, man ya'll wack i could of wrote better than that in like 5 min
i cant vote on this man.........;.

your raps are weak son, you trying to hard to make it ryhme your losing the flow.

weak battle both were weak need 2 elavate
ya was just rappin no real punch lines
but nephew j attempted to hit wit punches
n they were better than ethnic which had weak 2 no punches
so v/ nephew j
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can we get some votes for get this end................i just take topicals now and this is normal battle...............vote gfor get this close.........