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Chrit Diss
kids heads big,
his ego's like muchous, but`is "sick" staples done
& Willy deflate his stuff...... like vick's vapor rub
hate to say it, but its true his heads mad thick
now ur verses are worse...
than when u called urself.... a web cam pimp
my fists hit u in da skys, listen kid I'll stun u in fatigues
why am I even writin this...wen I just sonned u in the league
he hides well,
but fag, cheater, loser....thats what this geek is called
he said "but wait`ll u see my bitch"..... underneath it all
cuz lately u been droppin the wack, I burnt`chya words
...cuz u dont battle sad newbies but ur verses herbs
ur chick, she told me I scare her witta lack of respect
cuz half time I'm wither I hit it from behind,
and stare at the back of`er neck
its no conspiracy, this fake veteran lies good,
I aint gotta be the dopest,
feeble & spit already sed it better than I could
peace
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this needs elivation it isnt horrendous but there was alot of creativety missing.
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its alrite nothin really special, had some good wordplay, good flow keep elevatin bro
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of course i was just bored and hes who i face in LLL this week. :)
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nice, a few shots.. coulda served him something better but like u said u did just face him in LLL so, anything good u had to say youve pretty much said, still a nice verse// something to catch attention probly.. yo why u sign off aim fool
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Man if u gon diss Chrit, least come dope. This was kinda borin to me, structure made it hard to read n it got on my nerves after a coupla lines. Maybe thats jus me, but u gotta up ya dissin if u wanna diss someone. Keep elevatin.
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I didn t like this either, lack of creativity there really. Nice to see you arent using cliches, and the flows there, but the punches just dont make as big an impact as they should do.
Pz.
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elevation is needed but the creativity is there, flow needs work with ryming other than that keep elevatin...
ur chick, she told me I scare her witta lack of respect
cuz half time I'm wither I hit it from behind,
and stare at the back of`er neck
^^^^
best part of your verse.....
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