R.i.p.

i helplessly watch mah boy get shot up on da block/
it waznt neseccary that da nigga had ta shoot em down wit a glock/
da governments fucked up they sit on their lazy asses all day watchin da clock/
n when sumtin happens like a terrorist attack they jump up in shock/
n people are scared for life reminisin/
then they start ta wonda why aint da crooks in prison/
but i know why, cuz there aint no one there ta listen/
in there desperate times they try n talk about it, but people dont care they juss get up n dis em/
people dont get that life is juss one big decision/
u just dont undastand what ive been through/
all these wannabe bitches have no clue/
because of gang violence when i was six teen i lost my boo/
what happens in da streets and in washington d.c. all links up, i cant stop it im just a lonley soul but since u dont know about it then who/
yea as a person i grew/
but who do u think it waz for, for me or for u/
i just want u ta know ill be at yo funeral cryin wit my crew/

give me sum feedback on dis

peace

yo hot rhymes man, couldve re-worded some stuff man but dope drop, elevate and keep droppin

i liked the rhymes and how you expressed your emotions. that's what i like. keep it up.

aight yea thanks, uppin................

damn dese r sum hot rhymes inspired by eminem n nas n chillin in da hood

lol............................................... ..

You posted like what 4 Open mics and none of them have links in. So, Closed.