creating the machine(showling love to those taht created me) freestyle.

Letter to My 1st
By Na~Ledge 4 11 1 Minute Ago
by Raid-R
psykosis ft johnny 6 feet.....the unwritten law [keystyle]
By Psykosis 4 17 1 Minute Ago
by WORD~PERFECT

YO, THIS AINT NO DICKRIDING SHIT NAH MEAN? THIS IS LOVE AND RESPECTS TO THOSE THAT FED ME THE DRIVE TO DO THIS SHIT. SO EVEN THOUGH IT SEAMS MAD CHEESY THIS HERE IS A THANK YOU JOINT FOR THOSE CATS.

Straight out the gate im a keep it real,I don’t think I’d be anything if it wasn’t for META 5 And BORN TO KILL.
that’s just how I feel .. When I was new you 2 and WARCHILD
showed me diversity in free style, got me out that gangsta bullshit and created what I am now.
Taught me vocab and not to neglect it, show me to be authentic to hip hop and never disrespect it,then FEEBLE MIND did his ill rhymes leaving me infected.
Connected with COM and WEST learned talent manifest when your solo
BIO CHEMIST showed me Don’t swet your rep and collabs elivate you the best.
Then I got together with MASTER BLASTER and NEFARIOUS THOUGHT
Had me twisted as fuck on some necro shit. before JAY DOT…
There was JAY CYPH the first cat to hand me my ass showed me no matter how
Tight you are your bars can elivate never underestimate heads on mics.
From there was SMZ and RULE showed me topical skills along with ELEETE,
BERLINS FYNEST and JOHNNY 6 FEET.
I knew these two cats hungery and sicknen, looking for their shot to start rippen
Next thing you know PSYKOSIS and DJB became some of the illest flippen with writtens.
I give CREDZ his creds,GENOCIDE love for showing me a true hip hop head.
The battling class graduates rappers that will never fold, SEMINOLE,PBK,DUO,
And STAT QUO.
CENTER SIGHT I know you don’t know me… but it was your graphic insight
that showed me to try harder when I write so thanks homie.
When I got writers block and thought my skills disowned me there was YOUNG NEO
Who still gave me the drive to keep on thanks for that mijo.
Been in mad crews got some of the best reviews some of the most views
Made sure the hunger lumes cause an ego can paint doom.
Let the rhyme consume…then give a shout to the fakes
If it wasn’t for your hate I wouldn’t fight to be great.
see we can always elivate.. evolution begins from primate and resolves
to the homosapien as time revolves my brain esculates
my bar count doubles by calculate numerics of my esoteric mindstate.
with no shame see im so dedicated i drain the 3 percent water from my
7 ounces of brain.
just to spit the flow above the average even starve myself in between
posts per day so each one delivery comes out like a savage.
when i inflict the type of damage time couldnt manage... cause im
never outdated shit i go crazy on freestyle so bad perimedics
are called in to have me sedated.
im a pyro...rhymes get left insinerated..by the emcee so hot
when i die ill combust leaving myself cremated.

ill,long piece but worth reaing, only thing i thought was wrong with it was tha bars were stretched out too much,other than that this piece was ill, nice vocab,i liked tha topic, tight imagery,good rhyme scheme and use of multis, all in ll this was an ill piece,keep droppin tha hottness.~1~

Hot shit fam. Thanks for tha love, on the real some classic WORD flow. Nice to see sombody stepping up and showing lov to those who came beore. Uppin ur next drop. Definatly worth the read.

stretched???..........i dont think so its just the way he writes with his structure that makes it look that way.......no stretched lines at all.....


Great concept............i can allways count on you Word~Perfect to come up with a dope concept that no one touches on......im suprised my name was in there..thanx...you had a lot of dope heads help you out on this site, i see a lot of good names.....i can tell in your writing your like a mix of all of those kats you mentioned.. i think its good to take a second and show respect to all the heads that helped you elevate.........this structure had great flow, great vocab, great concept.......just great.. i would nominate this for you but people would say im Dick riden because you put my name in it......but if no one shows this peice its respect and nominates it then i will............dope man i look forward to your your threads in open mic everytime i see them......10/10

thanks pop and i dont care much for nominaten but im glad this is well recieved i try to mix the minds that influenced mine and fuse them into one style defining me and these cats stay hungry so i owe it to them and you to stay as hungry.i have another one im doing now to drop today and a collab peice if you down holla at me.

This was really good.
Great rhymes content and vocab.
I dont know how to tell you to improve,just ya know,formst it better i guess..

thanks twin im building to more

damn homie..........
dope ass piece......i should nominate this!!!!!!!!!
everything was perfect on this......tight topik......tight flow.....tight structure......tight rhyming concept,you know with the names and everything........damn homie keep dropppin.....

i give this 15/10!!!!!......above the scales dawg!!!!!

thank for that feed twin it means alot

whos this guy with your name.~1~

thx for the shout bruh...ya know I could say the same shit about u holmes...keep bringin' the heat as u always do...pz

Thank For The Love Yo But Yeah This Is Mad Love As For The Other Wordperfect I Dont Know Him But I Hope Him Luck Here And The Name Carries Heart

uppin

mm, shit was long, but a good read .. really intense, I dont think your bars were really stretched, its more just your form of writtin and i respect that. At first glance someone who was lazy might not want to read it, but if you do take the few minutes out and read it, its hott ... keep doin you

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Originally Posted by WORD~PERFECT

Then I got together with MASTER BLASTER and NEFARIOUS THOUGHT
Had me twisted as fuck on some necro shit. before JAY DOT…

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nice read, i enjoyed it, and keep remembering i am a sick ass dude :gfy: