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New York will be Forever
Rip is the New York logo for the Twin conspiracy
A terrorist threat that left thousands in misery
Seriously, I feel for the dead killed in the attack
Have a picture of the Twins on a plaque in the back
We are making no retaleation, and thats a fact
Afganestan is the Country Bush, Not Iraq
Our leader is lacking the consent of his nation
This is democracy bitch, not a dictation
Re-visit the remancipation proclamation
And listen to the people on this acasion
Another 4 years of hell, is what we're facin
He gonna start drafting, and for the next invasion
New York City is and always will be the greatest city
An attack on its Twin Towers, left many in pity
Manly those who lost the love ones in the act
Away New Yorkers now wanting to go back
The city is like a wonder, the world was given
Like a little slice of central ville heaven
Theres only 5 burrows, but in heaven there seven
I wish I could get one more look at them towers
But I was in school when I saw the second go in showers
Of debris and people falling, its been going on for hours
I wish I could I was giving, time traveling Powers
But whats done is done and New York still great
I think it was just God's sign of fate
Or the Pres. has to much shit on his plate
Thinking about his plans, makes me stay up late
And makes my New York born heart, full of hate
He blew it off when he was readin My Pet Goat
This is what the paper should of wrote
President, get off ur ass and do something fast
Dont be an ass and ignore it for some 1st grade class
People dying, thousands going up in flames in smoke
While he sits in the classroom, maybe sipping some coke
Then the mind of my eyes was a woke
By a the window behind that just broke
A plane staring me right in the face
THen explode and took me, with the rest of the place
R.I.P. victims of this terrorist act...God help the families
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another piece about 9/11, **yawn**. nothing stood out for me here, thge vocab was basic, the jabs at bush were standard stuff, i didn't see any multi's or strong imagery. i think you'd do a lot better with a more original topic. you did have a good sense of pace though, keep your strengths and work on your weaknesses man.
keep posting.
