ten lines, you drop first.
due in the next hour. I'll drop within ten minutes after your hour is up.
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ten lines, you drop first.
due in the next hour. I'll drop within ten minutes after your hour is up.
ill usher in a trashcan for this kid so his verse and rubbish is dealt -
and no i wont call feeble "weak minded" .. his name already does it itself *-
you've never elevated past a dike, -
infact your like, still using played disses your wack and bite -
now feebles concepts so old people read his punchlines in black an white (ha!) -
this bitch can't just sell, -
thats why hes sticking to text yall cuz rapping wise he needs strands of help -
feeble putting out a good audio? like bad demon gamblers he aint got a chance in hell -
and you aint from the ghetto bitch your RENTS RICH AN YA LAME HONEST-
the only time cats see FEEBLE on a hardblocks getting hit in the eye with a CEMENT BRICK WITH YA NAME ON IT-
holla
explanation: feeble means weak
just do the math... life aint made for this whore...
u wanted in the inner circle, thats what they made the radius for
mc sky ? can't not laugh, because i stop & you scoff
fuck a carpool, a cliff's the only place im dropping you off
choke the life out of you, i almost brought you some hope
now ima taut on the ropes of the kid i taught on the ropes..
your just - a page in my merk book
just imagine, this bar multiplied by ten is how gay that his verse looks..
i hurt rooks, your only faking you're great
put u in cardiac a-rest, to prove even ur hearts taking a break
wow i cant believe i came that weak purposefully..
i cant vote, not enough posts but id say mc sky took this 1 home
MC Sky...
ill usher in a trashcan for this kid so his verse and rubbish is dealt -
and no i wont call feeble "weak minded" .. his name already does it itself *-
Played.
you've never elevated past a dike, -
infact your like, still using played disses your wack and bite -
now feebles concepts so old people read his punchlines in black an white (ha!) -
Weak, worded poorly.
this bitch can't just sell, -
thats why hes sticking to text yall cuz rapping wise he needs strands of help -
feeble putting out a good audio? like bad demon gamblers he aint got a chance in hell -
Stretched as fuck and weak.
and you aint from the ghetto bitch your RENTS RICH AN YA LAME HONEST-
the only time cats see FEEBLE on a hardblocks getting hit in the eye with a CEMENT BRICK WITH YA NAME ON IT-
Shit this was stretched, worded bad and not personal.
Feeble...
just do the math... life aint made for this whore...
u wanted in the inner circle, thats what they made the radius for
Ok opener.
mc sky ? can't not laugh, because i stop & you scoff
fuck a carpool, a cliff's the only place im dropping you off
Heh, again ok.
choke the life out of you, i almost brought you some hope
now ima taut on the ropes of the kid i taught on the ropes..
What? don't understand this.
your just - a page in my merk book
just imagine, this bar multiplied by ten is how gay that his verse looks..
Decent.
i hurt rooks, your only faking you're great
put u in cardiac a-rest, to prove even ur hearts taking a break
Prolly best bar of the battle.
Overall, MC Sky, you need to sort your structure out man, that shit was so stretched and worded wrong, it was hard to read properly, and don't make 3 lines rhyme, make them a multi or 4 lines. Your punches were not very hard hitting either, some played. As feeble said himself, his verse wasn't anything special either, but it was enough to win this battle, he had harder punches and also had a structure that was readable.
No hate, just opinion.
V/Feeble.
Hit this up please...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=168740
Check your pms Feeble.
What the hell? Your structure is garbage Sky.
nothing.
vs.
just do the math... life aint made for this whore...
u wanted in the inner circle, thats what they made the radius for
mc sky ? can't not laugh, because i stop & you scoff
fuck a carpool, a cliff's the only place im dropping you off
Sky didn't have anything that I liked.. nothing hard hitting or remarkably witty. Feeble had the two bars I quoted. They actually made me chuckle. Feeble pretty much took this without trying .. in all categories..
v/ Feeble Minded
Please check my battle vs. Psykosis.
Feeble has a TNL voting ring....
Sky's beefing w/ god/ poor attempt @ sway'n
vs
God's Comments...
vs
nothing.
vs.
just do the math... life aint made for this whore...
u wanted in the inner circle, thats what they made the radius for
mc sky ? can't not laugh, because i stop & you scoff
fuck a carpool, a cliff's the only place im dropping you off
close battle...& God almost took this, but he said he wouldnt post anymore...then you went off and quoted the fool. so vote - feeble
lol, check out my battle w/ SF please.
funny how all the votes commin from herbs in crews on this site..
MC Sky, sway again.. and you'll be DQ'd
Freepost removed.
I've been on this site over a year longer then you.
So tell me again Sky, who's the herb.
& he beat you, why dont you just go back to sucking at audio?
ill usher in a trashcan for this kid so his verse and rubbish is dealt -
and no i wont call feeble "weak minded" .. his name already does it itself *-
-OK OPENER WITH A PUNCH
you've never elevated past a dike, -
infact your like, still using played disses your wack and bite -
-PUNCH BUT NEED MORE EFFORT INTO IT
now feebles concepts so old people read his punchlines in black an white (ha!) -
this bitch can't just sell, -
thats why hes sticking to text yall cuz rapping wise he needs strands of help -
THE 1ST LINE WAS PLAYED, THE 2ND LINE WAS A PUNCH
feeble putting out a good audio? like bad demon gamblers he aint got a chance in hell -
and you aint from the ghetto bitch your RENTS RICH AN YA LAME HONEST-
the only time cats see FEEBLE on a hardblocks getting hit in the eye with a CEMENT BRICK WITH YA NAME ON IT-
-GOOD CLOSER WITH A PUNCH
SKY-OK YOU FELLED OFF AT SOME POINTS. FLOWED PRETTY CHOPPY. PUNCHES WAS UP AND DOWNS. PERSONALS WAS GOOD. WORDPLAY'S HERE WAS KINDA WEAK ELEVATE. 7/10
just do the math... life aint made for this whore...
u wanted in the inner circle, thats what they made the radius for
-GOOD OPENER AND A PUNCH VERY CREATIVE
mc sky ? can't not laugh, because i stop & you scoff
fuck a carpool, a cliff's the only place im dropping you off
-WEAK
choke the life out of you, i almost brought you some hope
now ima taut on the ropes of the kid i taught on the ropes..
-WEAK USING "ROPES" 2-TIMES
your just - a page in my merk book
just imagine, this bar multiplied by ten is how gay that his verse looks..
-PUNCH NEED MORE EFFORT
i hurt rooks, your only faking you're great
put u in cardiac a-rest, to prove even ur hearts taking a break
-CLOSER OK
FEEBLE- VERSE WAS KINDA OK. YOU START OFF GOOD, THEN THE NEXT BAR YOU WENT PLAYED TO WEAK. PUT A LITTLE EFFORT IN THESE PUNCHES. THE 1ST BAR WAS CREATIVE. 5/10
OK ONE-SIDED BATTLE, I DONT KNOW WHERE THESE D/R'Z COME FROM BUT I THINK DIFFERENTLY, NOT BECAUSE ME AND YOU FEEBLE ARE BATTLING. MC SKY HAD SOME PUNCHES SOME WERE GOOD SOME WERENT THAT MUCH EFFECTIVE. FEEBLE YOUR PUNCHES WAS WEAK FAM, NOT MUCH VERY EFFECTIVE, NEED ELEVATING A BIT. I'MMA HAVE TO GO WITH MC SKY WITH THIS ONE BASICALLY HE CAME HARDER WITH PUNCHES PUTTED A LITTLE MORE EFFORT, FEEBLE YOU DIDN'T GET MY VOTE CAUSE YOUR PUNCHES WAS WEAK.
PC NO HATE FROM YOU FEEBLE
who this?^
v/ Feeble, obviously Sky didnt know what he was getting into.
V-feeble
both drops were good here...but feeb's came harder on the closer
plus the opener here was good...
but feeble came harder though
v/ feeble
Okay battle I guess it was completly one sided in my view. Feeble had a better verse and better punches. Sky the explainations is a bad idea.
v - feeble.