Battle of the gentlemen: Mr W.Rite vs. Mr. Key

10-20 Lines, agree on it. Check in by Wednesday.
Battles are due 11:59 eastern time on Friday.
Vote on at least 3 battles & leave links.
Only LLL competitors may vote on LLL battles.
I'm not laying out more rules, but don't do anything stupid.

Check, how bout 12

12 sounds good..

This is the only time i can drop today, good luck and drop soon

25 to Life, ya age coincides with ya chronic stay on RB
I guess your lifes' jus not Write........without a damn IP
Punches will daze this foo, destroy u, then ill blaze ya crew
But I swear i jus beat a wack DM head 2 weeks ago...Deja Vu?
You got a smooth drive to victory, d/r's will always vote for ya
Makin my chances of winning a shot in the dark...
................................that hit rites black ass in Georgia
25 at mommys house, he makes excuses but this jerk is jobbless
Drops wack text verses, and tells his mom its a work in progress
A gentle-man match is the perfect type, you've been soft for years
So its always a treat to see u Rite.....when all ur cookies are cleared!
A comeback? Its too late bitch, ur times done jus logg off the site
Cause every one gets a turn at Greatness.....to bad ya Mista write
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you aint a serious threat to me, cus I’m so raw and past fame
the naked eye might think you’re dope, until it saw your last name
yea, I’ll admit…he’s not a fag, although that’s what he’s famous for
but she didn’t steal your virginity bitch, u just fucking paid the whore
to be honest, i aint feeling this prick, in this league...the best'll prosper
when i say, i'm on some next level shit.........he ran to check his roster
step ya game up pimp...take my advice...before its too late
told him to get his shit together... he went and got his suitcase
he's got potential...decent flow...newcomer, i'm so proud of this guy
last year would've been perfect for the league...but guess what, its 2005

Mr. Key

Punches will daze this foo, destroy u, then ill blaze ya crew
But I swear i jus beat a wack DM head 2 weeks ago...Deja Vu?
25 at mommys house, he makes excuses but this jerk is jobbless
Drops wack text verses, and tells his mom its a work in progress

Mr. Write

yea, I’ll admit…he’s not a fag, although that’s what he’s famous for
but she didn’t steal your virginity bitch, u just fucking paid the whore
to be honest, i aint feeling this prick, in this league...the best'll prosper
when i say, i'm on some next level shit.........he ran to check his roster
he's got potential...decent flow...newcomer, i'm so proud of this guy
last year would've been perfect for the league...but guess what, its 2005

i got writey-poo here

v/ write

Punches will daze this foo, destroy u, then ill blaze ya crew
But I swear i jus beat a wack DM head 2 weeks ago...Deja Vu?

vs

to be honest, i aint feeling this prick, in this league...the best'll prosper
when i say, i'm on some next level shit.........he ran to check his roster



imo.... and the doper punch is W.Rites.

v/W.Rite

next level, check the roster line hands down best of the battle

dope shit

v/ w.rite

vote W. Rite eassssssssy

25 to Life, ya age coincides with ya chronic stay on RB
I guess your lifes' jus not Write........without a damn IP

decent. write nameplays = played.

Punches will daze this foo, destroy u, then ill blaze ya crew
But I swear i jus beat a wack DM head 2 weeks ago...Deja Vu?

good. lol.

You got a smooth drive to victory, d/r's will always vote for ya
Makin my chances of winning a shot in the dark...
................................that hit rites black ass in Georgia

nope. seen the 'shot' thing a lot, and this wasnt a good variation of it.

25 at mommys house, he makes excuses but this jerk is jobbless
Drops wack text verses, and tells his mom its a work in progress

good.

A gentle-man match is the perfect type, you've been soft for years
So its always a treat to see u Rite.....when all ur cookies are cleared!

another nameplay? write nameplays = played. you should've already known this.

A comeback? Its too late bitch, ur times done jus logg off the site
Cause every one gets a turn at Greatness.....to bad ya Mista write
a decent line. good nameplay, but half your lines here have been nameplays..im tired of seeing them.

your main flaw was way too many nameplays. the work in progress and the DM/ Deja vu thing were both good bars, the rest was blah.


you aint a serious threat to me, cus I’m so raw and past fame
the naked eye might think you’re dope, until it saw your last name
decent.

yea, I’ll admit…he’s not a fag, although that’s what he’s famous for
but she didn’t steal your virginity bitch, u just fucking paid the whore
again, decent. seen the steal thing before, decent variation.

to be honest, i aint feeling this prick, in this league...the best'll prosper
when i say, i'm on some next level shit.........he ran to check his roster
good..

step ya game up pimp...take my advice...before its too late
told him to get his shit together... he went and got his suitcase
lol, nice.

he's got potential...decent flow...newcomer, i'm so proud of this guy
last year would've been perfect for the league...but guess what, its 2005
filler..

write, you barely beat this guy. both of you had two good lines in my eyes, writes next level line was the best of the battle i thought. mr key could've won this if he had dropped some of those nameplays, they got old fast, like three months ago theyw ere old.. had u dropped some of those and come up with some above average stuff instead you would've won.but this was actually a good battle, 4/10 bars from each were good, im not complaining.

v/ write

i dont see how this was an 'easy' win... am i crazy?

Check the roster. Only good line of battle.

it wasn't an easy win for write. both had two good bars, but the rest of mr. key's stuff hurt him, i.e. all the write nameplays. thats why write won. but if the other voters think he won easy, they think he won easy. either vote yourself or don't post about it.

^Word, thanks center, but its all about learnin from my mistakes tho, gotta get outta the jr. mentality, lol, good battle Write, 1

Key gave em a nice challenge, but i got a seat on the bandwagon too here.. write got this..

Deja Vu line was your best Key .. but your closer, felt it was pretty forced. had a interesting idea to it though.


write had more quotables, and a stronger verse.. roster line, and opener was humorous.. just came better imo.

good battle though.

v/ write