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Die Alone
If you think you know redemption, life its temptin
You know pimpin, im limpin on one leg crawling
When most people thinks life all about balling
I'm falling and not gonna stop because of the malicious bitches
Vicious Stitches, to the head of a concrete accident
Fakers just act a stint. just tryna stay calm
Black Jesus stappled to the fucking hand of his palm
Killa J's the lattest Phenom, waking up from a fucking coma
A rich mother fucker without a diploma , forming a new version of jaw breaker
You want to know the fucking meaning of "Law Breaker"?, step into hell with a man that has been vanish and demanish
Stranded, with people who demanded to die unwanted with a fist lock
Dying cold within six spots, with wrapping bitches onto my dick within a liplock
When i know what people saying today aint Hip Hop, Its shit hop
I see you watching me lifeless laying on the curb, waiting to swerve around this nerd
Im begging god to please take me home
Lifes more better with a bitch rather than to DIE ALONE
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this joint was tight i like the set up but it should have been longer piece out kid
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This piece wasnt bad at all...you seem to show you tried here...I think the concept wasnt bad at all...Just a couple of mispelled words here an there...but nothing you cant fix...I can see with a little work you will develop a pretty good style...keep at it...do your thing...
Hit mine up when you get a chance...thanks ahead...
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