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frosty the snowman
fuck em always, i aint ever been a fan
cause err a cold -mother fucker- (there) frosty the snow man....
i take you out, one shot with my rubber band
cop shop will sink me under quicker than quicksand....
with 15 shots in the glock in his hand
you know,
i got to take a stand, on the land, like a man....
theres 15 shots in the glock in a white hand,
wrong land, white man, understand, white ban
D..A..N..G...
non stop off the top of the glock
you know,
theres 15 shots in the hands of white cops
with the whole fucking lot, am i ready or not
sheeeeaaaaaiiitttttt..i was born to rock,
rolmfao at ya cops,bunch o fucks
i laugh at ya glock
i move the blocks
i was born to shut this shop,
born to stop this lot
hell fire hot,
yall ghosts in hells game "Back Up..!!!!"
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dawg....this was poor...you used 2 same rhyming words over and over again...made the piece seem like it was going round in circles...make a story and stick to it...start,middle,end...simple structure...use it
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roowlf....so it was a raggedy assed rhyme with words used over and over 2 etch in your memory that run circles around you,with unfamiliar story lines and a structure uncommon.ok.
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no....it was ass...simple
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You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.
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take your little mayberry raps some where else faggot
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You little lazy ass son of a bitch. Invalid links. If I see this again You will be banned for a week. No questions asked.