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imma put ya grill on the grill...so that your spit gets hot...
you really wanted to be dope...so you quick hit pot...inhale...exhale...
then like on stage you choke...in hell...in a rage you toke...
its the page you tote...so you can read your pre-written verse...
hell hes written worse...than that free he was spitting first...
you can call me SHAQ...cuz imma bring HEAT to the game...
repeat the three-peat...and defeat this lame...
see the teeth marks in my prior spits...thats cuz BLAKE bit em...
he brings hate wit him...cant hate my verse cuz its better...
so you see BLAKE quitting...
we both FLY WEIGHTS...why wait...why not try bait...to see if i can get BLAKE out...
this kids like a CLASSY LADY...cuz when i begin to spit BLAKE's out...
your mum was shouting 'loser!' the moment she concieved you
and now u carry forth that tag like it's your only virtue
calling yourself 'shaq' but u don't bring the 'heat' it's obvious
cos we've all read your battles with arsenist and ominous!
why you callin me a hater that's jus your narrow minded vision
i'll leave your head spinning like 360 flips on transitions
that wasn't a battle script u jus posted, don't your text give you shame
u wouldn't even be hot if you popped that 'x' before your name
change your game, self glory with no punches man you haven't got a clue
find a crew
cos with the weak shit u jus posted no one will ever vote for you!
done
seff bee
sefton blake your mum was shouting 'loser!' the moment she concieved you
and now u carry forth that tag like it's your only virtue
...not a good first bar
calling yourself 'shaq' but u don't bring the 'heat' it's obvious
cos we've all read your battles with arsenist and ominous!
....good, but bitten... this line is disqualified... hehe
why you callin me a hater that's jus your narrow minded vision
i'll leave your head spinning like 360 flips on transitions
...vision,spinnin,transistion... thats good... not really a punch, its just feeding
that wasn't a battle script u jus posted, don't your text give you shame
u wouldn't even be hot if you popped that 'x' before your name
...ok cypher, and an ok punch
change your game, self glory with no punches man you haven't got a clue
find a crew
cos with the weak shit u jus posted no one will ever vote for you!
...awright ending...
X-PerTeASe imma put ya grill on the grill...so that your spit gets hot...
you really wanted to be dope...so you quick hit pot...inhale...exhale...
...ok cypher but not a very good opener...
then like on stage you choke...in hell...in a rage you toke...
its the page you tote...so you can read your pre-written verse...
...eh....
hell hes written worse...than that free he was spitting first...
you can call me SHAQ...cuz imma bring HEAT to the game...
...self glorification
repeat the three-peat...and defeat this lame...
see the teeth marks in my prior spits...thats cuz BLAKE bit em...
...ok maltis and a good punch
he brings hate wit him...cant hate my verse cuz its better...
so you see BLAKE quitting...
we both FLY WEIGHTS...why wait...why not try bait...to see if i can get BLAKE out...
this kids like a CLASSY LADY...cuz when i begin to spit BLAKE's out...
....bad ending...
my vote goes to Xpertease.... most of blakes shit was bitten or feeding... both of you need to change shit, like xpertease that was a sucky ending...
and blake, you gotta quit bitting... try writing your verse without looking at anybody elses verse, then youd probably be really good...
what u chattin bout kwiks..? i didn't look at nowt like innit, but maybe i should've if others have used it b4
but fuk it
peace bruv
sb
-X-PerTeASe-
imma put ya grill on the grill...so that your spit gets hot...
you really wanted to be dope...so you quick hit pot...inhale...exhale...
^^nah homie
then like on stage you choke...in hell...in a rage you toke...
its the page you tote...so you can read your pre-written verse...
^^not feelin your verse so far
hell hes written worse...than that free he was spitting first...
you can call me SHAQ...cuz imma bring HEAT to the game...
^^damn somthins wrong cuz this is hard to break down this way
repeat the three-peat...and defeat this lame...
see the teeth marks in my prior spits...thats cuz BLAKE bit em...
^^nah man
-Sefton Blake-
your mum was shouting 'loser!' the moment she concieved you
and now u carry forth that tag like it's your only virtue
^^decent not the best opener
calling yourself 'shaq' but u don't bring the 'heat' it's obvious
cos we've all read your battles with arsenist and ominous!
^^eh
why you callin me a hater that's jus your narrow minded vision
i'll leave your head spinning like 360 flips on transitions
^^not bad
that wasn't a battle script u jus posted, don't your text give you shame
u wouldn't even be hot if you popped that 'x' before your name
^^good
change your game, self glory with no punches man you haven't got a clue
find a crew
cos with the weak shit u jus posted no one will ever vote for you!
^^good
This battle is one sided sefton blakes verse against nothing
Vote sefton blake
he brings hate wit him...cant hate my verse cuz its better...
so you see BLAKE quitting...
we both FLY WEIGHTS...why wait...why not try bait...to see if i can get BLAKE out...
this kids like a CLASSY LADY...cuz when i begin to spit BLAKE's out...
My vote goes to X though blake had some tite shit it just didn't hit as hard
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Celestial
Originally posted by:Xpertease
imma put ya grill on the grill...so that your spit gets hot...
you really wanted to be dope...so you quick hit pot...inhale...exhale...
^^THIS COULD OF BEEN WORDED BETTER.....AND WHAT'S UP WIT THE INHALE EXHALE....IF YOUR GOING TO PUT THAT LEARN HOW TO USE IT..
then like on stage you choke...in hell...in a rage you toke...
its the page you tote...so you can read your pre-written verse...
^^THERE WAS NO REAL PUNCH HERE OR PERSONAL...PLUS IT DIDN'T EVEN RHYME
hell hes written worse...than that free he was spitting first...
you can call me SHAQ...cuz imma bring HEAT to the game...
^^SOME S.G......PLUS IT DIDN'T RHYME
repeat the three-peat...and defeat this lame...
see the teeth marks in my prior spits...thats cuz BLAKE bit em...
^^HE COULD OF ONLY DONE A THREE-PEAT IF HE WAS WITH THE LAKERS NIMROD...PLUS IT DIDN'T RHYME..
he brings hate wit him...cant hate my verse cuz its better...
so you see BLAKE quitting...
^^NO PUNCH
we both FLY WEIGHTS...why wait...why not try bait...to see if i can get BLAKE out...
this kids like a CLASSY LADY...cuz when i begin to spit BLAKE's out...
^^STRETCHED OUT BAR......PLUS YOU RECYCLED A LINE....
you have to work on a lot of shit dawg.....like structure....droppin hot punches...fresher concepts.....basically you have to get better wittier rhymes then you were just spitting.........I don't know if you were high or what....but this was the weakest battle i've read from you.........so elevate......pz.....
Originally posted by:Sefton Blake
your mum was shouting 'loser!' the moment she concieved you
and now u carry forth that tag like it's your only virtue
^^OK OPENER
calling yourself 'shaq' but u don't bring the 'heat' it's obvious
cos we've all read your battles with arsenist and ominous!
^^1ST LINE YOU FED....IN THE RULES IT SAID HOUSE RULES WHICH IMPLY'S TO FEEDING.....SO THERE'S NO NEED TO GO ON WIT THIS ANYMORE CAUSE YOU GOT DQ'D..........
why you callin me a hater that's jus your narrow minded vision
i'll leave your head spinning like 360 flips on transitions
that wasn't a battle script u jus posted, don't your text give you shame
u wouldn't even be hot if you popped that 'x' before your name
change your game, self glory with no punches man you haven't got a clue
find a crew
cos with the weak shit u jus posted no one will ever vote for you!
look in my opinion you would of had this cause you had a better spit then X on this one...........but you decided to feed which got you DQ'd and now you lost.........watch the whole feeding purpose only newb's feed so that was an herbish move.............elevate from that ...............dont let it stick to you........
V/Xpertease
not for the fact that his verse was good...........but for the simple fact that.sefton fed off of his verse and in the rules it's no feeding pz........
hit the link back plz..........much appreciated one........
what the fuck is feeding...!!!!???!!???!!!????!!!!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!
i didn't read shit of any 1 else's. if it came up the same then fuck me i should've spat betta...
wtf!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!??!??!?
wow weak shit here anyways......
x-pertease nice job you hit that shit pretty good and sefton wtf are u thinkin' you lost because you bitso much man u gotta stop feeding!!!!! I vote for x-pertease, but both y'all need to elevate!!! Hit my battle plz both of you!!!!!!