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go ahead and spit first
where you at you i bout to lay my verse if you don't hurry up
Sorry my brother broke a glass, and I had to clean it up, I'm dropping now.
How cute son, I got a piece of the action, ya moms slept with 2 men,
She was all like "Take it out, before you make that mistake again!"
M.V.P of what? Awww is it in your mothers vise?
"I love my little boy, he's the apple of my eye!"
Just kidding your adopted, but dont' take it to heart
You wern't wanted by alot, we could tell from the start
Yes, your taken to school like it was kindergarten
Everyones laughing at you, "the kid who farted"
It's just that easy to see someone get beaten
Like the fat kid, your verse was just eaten....
i'll murder your ass with lyrics
i'll rip your ears off so you can't hear it
i'll cut your hands off so you can never feel how it feels to be the best
i'll throw you the vest but put 12 in you before it even touches your chest
i must confess i am the best
because nigga i'm feelin relentless
niggas like you resent this
they call me the genie cuz i'll grant your deathwish trick
you mine as well slide down polls, grab a dress, and grow some tits
cuz you aint shit but a bitch
and i gonna leave you with this
this is why they call me m.v.p.
cuz i can come in as a rookie and leave with the victory
lol given you one funny ass mothafucka
ok this one was goies to given for just better flow rythm hits were a bit harder not many real hard ones but they made me laugh ...........vote-givin
How cute son, I got a piece of the action, ya moms slept with 2 men,
She was all like "Take it out, before you make that mistake again!"
NOT REALLY INSULTING HIM BUT HIS MUM... FUNNY AS FUCK THOUGH
M.V.P of what? Awww is it in your mothers vise?
"I love my little boy, he's the apple of my eye!"
I DONT REALLY GET THIS LINE...
Just kidding your adopted, but dont' take it to heart
You wern't wanted by alot, we could tell from the start
LOL... CLASSIC LINE... YOUR ADOPTED LA LA LA LA LA
Yes, your taken to school like it was kindergarten
Everyones laughing at you, "the kid who farted"
LOL... THATS ALL I HAVE TO SAY... LOL
It's just that easy to see someone get beaten
Like the fat kid, your verse was just eaten....
WTF? WEAK ENDING...
i'll murder your ass with lyrics
i'll rip your ears off so you can't hear it
A BIT OF SELF GLORY... NICE OPENER THAT...
i'll cut your hands off so you can never feel how it feels to be the best
i'll throw you the vest but put 12 in you before it even touches your chest
OK... FUNNY BUT STRUCTURE(WACK)
i must confess i am the best
because nigga i'm feelin relentless
TOO SHORT... NO REAL MEANING
niggas like you resent this
they call me the genie cuz i'll grant your deathwish trick
NOPE
you mine as well slide down polls, grab a dress, and grow some tits
cuz you aint shit but a bitch
THATS FUNNY
and i gonna leave you with this
this is why they call me m.v.p.
cuz i can come in as a rookie and leave with the victory
BITING... CLASSIC
structure: given light woops
mvp is total wierd
very noobish battle, not much shit ta vote on so
Funny:given
Flow:Given
guess thiz goes to given
Uppping this for votes please.......Up up and away!
All votes, are instantly returned.
v/given. better. "kid who farted". clever. i thought it was close, but mvp, talk less about death threats, and take other punches. you can both elevate some, but so can i...best a luck to ya fellaz, v/ given though
vote on this also please? im gettin restless...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=167116
Given-not too too bad...but you could have done betteer...i dont really like verses that you question in...i think they sound better if you state your punches and personals..instead of askin about them..but in a way you still worded your lines good..i like how you stayed on the same scenario while questionin in every line...umm...your flow was good..i liked all lines except ya closer
mvp-wak wak...yo..you gotz to even up your flow...your structure was alright..umm..your personals..and punches werent all that strong..i do think that you could have worded alot of your lines better...overall not too good
v/given