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Rules
No Biting or Feeding
No crew votes
No Dick Riding
No Hate
Blind spit
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youre livin life
not forgiving-mics, for reliving youre fights,
not givin-rights, like you were locked inside of a prison-fight,
forever lost among the dark, unless you were givin-light/
so now ill take a chance and go by jabbin-a-vet
grabbin-yah-neck, and stabbin -the-heck
i get youre tounge to ask youre mouth if youre done blabbin-it-yet/
you'll find im lurkin in shadows, searchin for cattle
i try to baffle opponents who try to grapple with shrapnel/
in pits of gravel we'll battle, i come to rattle-the-man
i leave you lieing in the dirt, youre adams apple-in-hand/
and then ill rip youre fuckin eyes out man before youre bitch-blinks,
and jam them in youre ass so you can see how bad youre shit-stinks/
with nine minutes to spare yee-haaaaaaa...........
well he you got like 4 minutes to drop or you losse by d/q
not that i really care if youre a few minutes late just not like forever late thats all
shitty fingaz, the fuck is with you?
Wipe your ass properly next time, fool.
I realize you need a genie to be granted a chance
So get off my dick, and pull up your damn pants
Keep you and your feminety to yourself
I'd let you son me,you might consider yourself a milf.
Ending this verse like it was your emcee career
I'd tell you to take a good look at ya self, but you broke the mirror
Insolent fucks try to comprehend rhymes, shit be gone
Heres some help with your rhymes, www.rhymezone.com
Sorry my little brother broke a glass, so I had to clean it up before he cut himself.
hey where this nigga at he's spoused to battle me to
given lights verse was so terrible and stupid It pains me to have to vote for him but im going to have to .. shifty you had good mulites but you werent using them as disses and most of your lines were filler.. next time use those mulites as disses and turn them against your opponent.. your last line was good but that was about the only real diss that you have against given light.. now givens verse was absolute ass crack but im going to have to vote for him because he came with more disses
hit this battle up with a vote if you guys can thank you
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=166634
lol ok now we need some votes up here ...yeah dont worry about it man ....
givin werd you r verse was horrible dont know what you was trying to do maybe it was the fack you went after him and seen his wack verse and thought well ill do just what I need to and you did it barely pullin out the victory well not much more I can say except shiffty your multis need to be worded into punches than you would of merked this verse and work on not so many fillers
V GL
hahaha lol ok i understand what youre saying but his verse was shit guys come on....i have everything their just didnt focus on the hits too much thats all, i will next time
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