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ayo,i dun kno how to start this, so imma start this by rippin this mic all apart shit/
yo,my army is marchin in factions,so in fact when i use my force im only usin fractions, causin accidents, caused by malicious actions/
demolish emcees with my malignant tactics, no escapein tha havoc, thats released on every combatant/
my saliva consists of sulfuric acid, so when i spit im literally meltin all these whack asses/
short simple im bored PEACE ~1~
Open Mic isnt used for this shit, WTF, this is starting to piss me off...
People writing battle requests and shit like this... 'Oh i was bored, and its not good' then Why the fuck post it? its getting ridiculous
Come back and post sumthing decent, or even something you've tried on
This was poor, next time be creative and try express more than rhymes
Peace
You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.
it was an aight drop but i agree with Novacain......be real about it next time bro
Work on a more traditional rhyming scheme. You're not setting up your rhymes and the verse became short. Also work on your topic, think of something you can go in depth with.
Word, nigga there be a Freestyle cypher for u to post in when u be bored son. OM's is written pieces or at least dope freestyles. Work on ur ish nigga.
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