Proven

chorus:
it aint enough for you that i say i love you
or i come around n infront of my boys i say boo
you constantly remind me of my last
buttill proven guilty youll be my life long task


verse1:
How could I be accused of bein not in love
when I contantly try n tell you that you're above
all those other girls that i try n eye spy
but no matter how i say i love you i get the goodbye
or hung u on in my face,when im the one who got the place
but i never trip all i say is i love you and go
till the next day i stay out late while you call me a no-show
to your friends sayin how i was out wi some chick
toungin her snatch and lettin her tickle my dick
but you literally take things to an extreme of lies
when im out night i go to my second home and try
to make your content with your life but you dont know
what i have to go through to make sure ur comfor-table

chorus:




verse2:
Now its a matter of my commitment and cash
when day n night i take care of ur silly ass
accusin me of cheatin,datin other girls n suff
when i could just as eaily through up the guy Muff
in ur face and see what hes become for you
but you deny it by sayin hes never stopped through
but the neighbors call me up sayin a Black Chevys pulled up
with no friends hes a tall black male with two guns tucked
wtf is he plannin to shoot me,when i literally saved his street
came thru tearin up a nigga who was thoro Edmonds ass beat
blood along my shoes and all you can do is invite him in
hell ive gone dry two weeks n six days wtf whens my stick in
neva thats why i should close hose doors and make you suffer
but its been proven Muff is a punk and your makin me tougher
by sayin that hes a temporary feeling the emotions are short
hell lets see how short theyre when i buts a block in his port


chorus:


verse3:(crystals message)
Boo you cal me up 24/7 tellin me ur ready
but i cant leave cuzz my fam aint steady
you could ocme n visit we can go somewhere discrete
let me hit it on the bedor outside on the concrete
makin it hot and untameble the sun is against your back
makin it better as i make you cum like you were runnin track
heavy breathin long strokes make it tremble make u flinch
body twitches dick still itches to be sucked so get it wet
back n forth girl you make a nigga feel on top of the world
make it fun make it active pull ur head back n twirl
but never loose your place ur my girl always by my side
so i ove you day n night thru black n white yoll always ride
thats hwy i choose you to be my b.a.b.y until we die
i wont be why you cry at night and for your love i wont have to try

chorus:

this is ok, good flow. nice emotion and good rhyme's. there are a few bars I wasnt feeling. apart from them good drop.

eh this was pretty basic and simple.................flow was sorta force and lines were stretched but the emotion in this was good...........sounds like you made it pretty quik.......it also sounded like somthin you just wanted to get off your chest.....stay up Joka.......

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...1&page=1&pp=15
Well joka your in the crew so this doesnt really apply to you but every one else hit up this link for the Blade Oracles anthem

^^ight thanx fa tha feedback...yea that anthem was good...eh it was quick n somethin for me to get off my chest thank you for recognizing that other people just overlook that