Blind Verses, 10 lines.
G'luck
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Blind Verses, 10 lines.
G'luck
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when i use personals in battles im known to lose friends,
but look at you... can't even afford to choose them,
cuz you been.. fuckin around trying to find a buddy,
i see you on other sites thinking you'll become something,
you been on this site shittin out rhymes for 3 months,
been stuck at lightweight and gettin sonned.. going nuts,
here you are in bitch slapped callin out anyone you can,
desperate .. like a homeless man fishin through trashcans,
the foundation of your crew is a wastleland.. being destroyed by rappers,
don't think about the 2nd story.. worry bout the next chapter......
ok, good luck.
Man at least come original…….. start thinking outside the box
cuz if u’r punches are the key to success, I'm changing the locks
This is just a test of text, so I really don’t mean to hurt you dog…
it’s like you grab’d a dictionary.. but cant protect my words u saw..
…& if you think your being spared, its best to wake up, quick
cuz my threshold’s known to wrestle and pin before u can split
Mywords r stand’n the test of time...
…………..while sweep’n the welcome mat out from under you
To the victor goes the spoils… and well… your still jellous # 2
My rhyme contorts your spine…leave’n paraplegic characteristics
…& this kid still ain’t on Par with Rap if he comes backwards with it
Man at least come original…….. start thinking outside the box
cuz if u’r punches are the key to success, I'm changing the locks
…………..while sweep’n the welcome mat out from under you
To the victor goes the spoils… and well… your still jellous # 2
My rhyme contorts your spine…leave’n paraplegic characteristics
…& this kid still ain’t on Par with Rap if he comes backwards with it
vs
Nothing that i felt
sirus came harder and wittier. mywords didnt seem direct and he was played and weak.
vote/sirus x
(my words verse)
when i use personals in battles im known to lose friends,
but look at you... can't even afford to choose them,
cuz you been.. fuckin around trying to find a buddy,
i see you on other sites thinking you'll become something,
you been on this site shittin out rhymes for 3 months,
been stuck at lightweight and gettin sonned.. going nuts,
here you are in bitch slapped callin out anyone you can,
desperate .. like a homeless man fishin through trashcans,
the foundation of your crew is a wastleland.. being destroyed by rappers,
don't think about the 2nd story.. worry bout the next chapter......
(^^nothing in this verse striked me as a verse mo re of statements and opinions but did have strcuture n lil flow)overall2/10
(SirusX verse)
Man at least come original…….. start thinking outside the box
cuz if u’r punches are the key to success, I'm changing the locks
This is just a test of text, so I really don’t mean to hurt you dog…
it’s like you grab’d a dictionary.. but cant protect my words u saw..
…& if you think your being spared, its best to wake up, quick
cuz my threshold’s known to wrestle and pin before u can split
Mywords r stand’n the test of time...
…………..while sweep’n the welcome mat out from under you
To the victor goes the spoils… and well… your still jellous # 2
My rhyme contorts your spine…leave’n paraplegic characteristics
…& this kid still ain’t on Par with Rap if he comes backwards with it
(this verse had punches,personals,multis,flow,and stucture)id give it a 10/10
v-Sirusx no hate just honest point of view
wow, so you think Sirus' verse was flawless?
hop the fuck off for real.
vs.Quote:
Originally Posted by SirusX
nothing.
this was a one sided battle in my opinion. mywords, you didn't have any hard hitting punches. your structure and flow could have been better, including your wording. you didn't have any creative or witty punches in here either.. Sirus, you did better. your opener and closer were your best bars in this battle, which really killed shit. your flow was decent, as was your structure. you basically came harder than mywords in every aspect of this battle... but mainly wittiness and harder hitting punches.. which is why you get my vote here.
v/ SirusX
escuse this freepost...but sdfu -Text- either way he woulda got my vote n it was flawless you over the edge prick this is the net so you hop Bill Gates dick
my words u started off real nice, i was really feelin your opening bars.... but that was it man, i dont know what happened, u strayed away from the tight rhyme scheme and the punches started to lack as u continue'd, u have potential u just need to find it and use it... sirus..u had a real strong verse.. lock/key was nice and ur finisher was nice.. caught a personal in bar 3 or 4, u basically had a consistantly strong verse.. for that u hit harder and u win.. v/sirusx
when i use personals in battles im known to lose friends,
but look at you... can't even afford to choose them,
here you are in bitch slapped callin out anyone you can,
desperate .. like a homeless man fishin through trashcans,
vs.
Man at least come original…….. start thinking outside the box
cuz if u’r punches are the key to success, I'm changing the locks
…& if you think your being spared, its best to wake up, quick
cuz my threshold’s known to wrestle and pin before u can split
Mywords r stand’n the test of time...
…………..while sweep’n the welcome mat out from under you
To the victor goes the spoils… and well… your still jellous # 2
thought this was actually closer than what you guys are saying but X came harder and more consistant good battle though
V. X