fuck it gangster shit

sum shit i wrote in like 5 minutes


i should rush ya joint ‘N point the two barrels
snatch loot ‘N flee; to hell with all morals
pump mad shells in the ceiling for effect
fuck how u feeling, free that cash up i’m here to collect.
don’t wanna see you flinch, don’t move a fucking inch
i know its rude of me to do this, please excuse my fucking French
That’s how we stay hench, back in the day i sold bones on the bench
i blaze “those dro cones” ‘N get high,
i should rage war: make neighbourhood’s “no go zones,” live ‘N let die
i’m like “fuck a slice” i’m scooping the whole pie
yo where that cake at? ya’ll catz better tell me where that weights stacked
so u can get those O’s half’s quarters ‘N those eights jacked
i be that shadow in the dark-night who u don’t wanna meet-right
think u can street-fight? take these slugs close ya eyes ‘N sleep-tight
that’s how i keep-hype, creep inside ya dreams ‘N bring terror
turn ya blue skies to grey my gat spits thunderclaps like stormy weather.



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Yo i relate to this cus um a gangsta and i think u had some good vocab and rhymes...good drop man...keep it comin

good lookin out G no doubt

this was tight, nice structure nice flow, content was ok keep posting.
reply to my last post.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=163673

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

aight drop in my opinion u had some above average wordplay but I don't like this gangsta talk so i didn't enjoy readin it that much...but if that's what u do...pz

Berlin's best got it right, this was an ok piece, you got a few good rhymes. Excluding the topic, this was good.

But I don't get the whole gangsta stuff. I don't understand how being 'gangsta' can help you get across.

But, if this is what you are and what you write, then go for it.

Whatever you feel comfortable writing, stick with it. You said you only wrote it in 5 minutes, probably caus its a topic that easy for you to write about.
The rhymes were alright. The multi in the middle (French-hench-bench) seemed forced, I wasn't feelin it. Other than that, not bad.

aiight thanx for reading no doubt as for the whole gangster
its just like a real thing you know i aint saying its good or nothing
but certain people just done certain things and feel certain ways
this shit does exist thats why the prisons are always full and people get high
i write about millions of other things too... am also a poet

i dont kno how to post links but i always reply to others posts so if ma shit gets deleted fuck it its already been read 1
pz

If you dont know how to post links then Just put the persons name and title of the their piece....Posting Links isnt that hard man.....Just copy the URL from the address bar and paste it into your thread. I dont know why some people dont know how to do that.