my gansta side

not one of my deepest pieces, but everyone has some gansta in em, here's a little of mine.



Clack-click
somebody pulls out a ratchet, a gat which,
spits over seven rounds a second,
you gonna learn your lesson,
i'm the wrong one to be testin
when you see me act like you know me, or get cut like the rest
mess with the best I'll make a mess out ya chest
not impressed? i guessed as much
ya scared to touch these guns i clutch
and what i want is mine, just because i said so
but the drugs fucked with my mind, now i'm so forgetful.
keep a rosary hangin high, from the nearest bedpost,
but my closet holds a nine, and a lotta red clothes,
but you know, these red flags should send red flags to ya brain.
if you wanna remain bitch you'd better refrain
from fuckin with me, no i'm not an OG, i'm to young for that,
that don't me that i don't stay with the gats
and i'm not from the hood, that don't mean i wont shoot you,
motherfucker, you wouldn't believe the things that i'd do to,
ya bitch or ya family, no one is safe,
but its safe to say that you can't escape,
the caped crusader, well, minus the cape
you bitches talkin shit, bout to see what i'm about
but my name aint dick, so keep it out ya mouth


you know how we do, i'll return all love, so hit me up with some feedback.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161664
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uppin, everybody sleepin, its a sad world

It was nice a
uncovered things which someone may be thinkin more of which they wouldnt
it had some points in it that were dramatic others climaxed toa point of a tru G's mind..it was nice

Definitely showin off the gangsta side. Favorite bar was
"when you see me act like you know me, or get cut like the rest
mess with the best I'll make a mess out ya chest"
You kept a good structure throughout, the lines didn't seem stretched.
Thanks for checkin mine out.

keep a rosary hangin high, from the nearest bedpost,
but my closet holds a nine, and a lotta red clothes,
but you know, these red flags should send red flags to ya brain.
if you wanna remain bitch you'd better refrain

Nigga that shit right there was nice.

you bitches talkin shit, bout to see what i'm about
but my name aint dick, so keep it out ya mouth

I feel u there. Shit u spittin was aight in some places, dope in them ^, a lil whack in others tho. Gotta up consistency, but yo man, nice piece. Was short n direct to da point, i was feelin it dogg.

Stay writin.

1

strait gangsta ... not bad still .. this was a cool flow

fav line was that "it's mine cause I say so" .. dope

stay up

thanx, uppin for more feeds, drop a link and i'll return the love

uppin

This was o..k....nice writtens...they flow was on point...had that merking type of attitude toward it..I liked it...

3.8/5

it was hot for bein a "G" Thang..LOL.....Keep Dropin like this it dope...

Peep This and reply...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=163440

up for more, thanx guys

too simple rhymin...topic is blah...elevate as we all do...pz

wasnt really feeling this....like Berlin said it was really simple...and i really aint into that whole gangster fascination type rhyme scheme...keep elevating duke...one