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How Do You Want It
"love the way u activate ya hips n put ya ass out"
got me wantin it so bad we bout to smash out
wanna fuck u n i cant even lie about it
if u wanna dick up in ya stomach im the guy about it
met u at the club grindin up on me so easy
body talkin shit to me i can tell ya ass is sleezy
now if ya wanna fuck wit me, heres ur chance
have a couple drinks,dance,then slip a finger down ya pants
tell ya friend i wanna get up inside her, fuck if she gotta man
how bout a menage trois? if not, its cool i understand
mr. cali national, the playa who they ask for
jus like the other tricks, we fuckin on the damn floor
"its either him or me. -- champagne, hennessey"
we can be fuckin buttnaked on the beach like in a fantasy
witness how we freak in the shower scene,dick is wat they fiend
the next day she complainin bout how her parents seen
approachin bitches witta passion, for a long time
but they driven by attraction, cuz of my strong rhymes
bodies be bangin i love the way they taunt it
now come to daddy suga n tell me how u want it
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=150805
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=145132
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LMFAO biteing 2pac you fag.
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he really is bite'in, HAHAHAHAHAHA, pretty. good, thanks to pac
peep it
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=160949
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r u serious thats tupacs???? i really didnt know that..... dumbasses i know that....jus thought i would make my own version.....
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HA HA HA ............your fucking wack fool fuck outa here
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lmao ya that was wack amn and u didnt need to do any of that in non-sense
im not going to even give feed back to u....
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you tried to steel tupacs rhyme... BITCH.. you betta get yur whack ass out of here
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tried to steal? i didnt steal shit i jus did my own version of it.....did n e one hate on eminem n 50 when they did hail mary ...nope i thought it was tight..... i really could care less if yall thought it was wack....
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look, its pretty good for being your own version, but thats bullshit using other peoples especially pacs shit to write ur rhymes
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I must admit, i dont like it when people use pacs rhyme schemes thingy to make their own version of the same song, it usually ends up wack - which is an embarrasment to the origional song - or a blatent copy - which is wack because you bited of someone... In future G, I'd just stick to writing your own thing, not hating but you show you talent alot better when you come up with something unique and trademark you. :)
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fa sho i appreciate the last two feedbacks they was positive...i know its pac no one can be him but imma big ass tupac fan n i know its bitin but i jus wantin to see wat i get in feedback if people read it...i didnt think people would get all bent out of shape like its was there verse i did but i aint trippin thanks for the feed ...