OK.. Looky Here

"Ok boys and girls
here are some principal referrals
please go to the office immediatly
or ill write you up for not listening to me"
fuck school it aint' teach me shit
just to be racist, fuck ho's, and some kids get fucked with
while other's are built and stand tall
fights once and forever he shall not fall
or she for that matter
which ever one suits you and you think is better
just to tell you here
more racism happens in schools around me
than anywhere else in the damn country
wonder y is that
and then they tell you don't have sex
but give you talks about that
and give you condoms and crap
tell you sex is bad but be protected
abstinence is the only way to stop aids and hiv
but what the fuck happens when u get married
u still gonna fuck and if it was ment for you get hiv
shit you gonna get fucked and gonna die b
just cuz u tryin to have some with b
gee that shit really must suck b

i like da concept but ya structure is kinda off in sum spots n u need to use more multis but it was straight. peep my OM Finally feat Six n drop sum HONEST feedbak. Piece.

No, i didnt really feel this peice. It was pretty simple
and it contradicted itself right off the bat.

No hate but it didnt appeal to me.

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.