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Throw it down....
my brain melts and nervous system begins to freeze
the world slowly evaporates around me and begins to leave
my hands move and the wind hits my face bringing me back
the beatbox drops and i relies that im back but on attack
i open my mouth and words fall out onto the pavement
with every breath i take they lift off to slighty change it
i shorten my lines to take shorter breaths
my mind runs dry of words as i hit the depths
my flow stalls sweat drips slowly down my cheek
time stops around me as the outcome starts looking bleak
my brain fires up again and words start churning out
i shake it off and take back what i was talking about
i hit the zone and my rhyme's hit that certain place
where elevation is not needed only you opponents face.
i go through the motions...left hook...right jab and uppercut
throwing punches blindly thought they connect and turn it up
im amped the only thing that exists is me and my words
i slow my flow and stop it on a single word.
the beatbox drops off and all is silent.
i wana keep going fuck the beatbox i dont need to ride it.
i drop my jaw retract my tounge and spit one last sentence.
my minds talking so much i cant even expell words into exsitence
yet the last few words get pushed and sound correct.
as i inspect the these words that left him wrecked
i turn to leave and relies that will do for now
cause this is what happens when i begin to throw it down
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Once again the topical King, Shit is crunk as fuck, nothing in this is lame every thing is crunk. nothing other than crunk.
Yo return the favor---
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=160007
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without a doubt ill material you forver elivating twin
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you thanks on the feed back fam.....more feed please thanks
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WHAT WHAT this is ann upp reconize
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your story tellin skills is nice.. but you rhyme scheme was mad simple, still i was feeling this...made me think of 8 mile though..anyways this was a nice drop..feeling it...return the favor...
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lol^ word to the simple ryhme scheme but its how it came out soo yup im happy
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mos def. one of the illest i've seen in awhile.. very nice drop Psykosis.
mosts kats don't spit like that, that real skill.. you got it.
good drop fam.
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yo man that was good.....word at simple rhymes but it didn't matta because everythin else was good....keep it up man
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yo upp can i get some feed back on this
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tight drop Psykosis u def skilled on the topical side...I likes this very much...also good to see u improvin...pz fam
