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Gone!
Up! You motherfucking Fugmuggins!
lol iight sence you put it that away check mine out also
dope i like your style, hit myne up.
erm....okayyy...... :whacky:
well. Up.
:bored:
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Nice Drop man, liked it a lot. You structured it well and it had good flow and multies. It was a good read through. Made me feel for the carachter of phyliss. Made me a little sad when she dies. You kept the peice entertaining for the whole, pretty consistent and an overall good drop.
Yeah i liked this a lot , it had good rhymes and a good story behind it, well structured.. i liked the read and it flowed nicely as well.. keep up the good work
much luv
thank you guys :)
Notty I replied to yours already.
up.
I don't know what to say. I would describe this as a dry poem.
if you could understand that
Yeah, it's more geared as a poem than anything else. I put it in PS too, I just put it in here to see what responses it would get here. thanks for reading anyway.
ya it was nice...good structure and everything to it im liking it, nice sceam and carried thoughts in my mind u gave me into u while u put them in words...
overall im liking it
nice g'job man...
its pretty dope, i like the storyline and the rhymes. it had good structure too. keep it up and keep elevatin...peace