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GC Mixtape Volume 1
music is my life i pledge to do my best,
writtin my lyrics strong til my progress is addressed,
n my text is complex, enough to fit the standards,
you throw out questions...i randomly then answer,
spread through this website like cancer,
not like an erode i never wear away,
man i saw the ring but i aint die in seven days,
want to be a famous face someone who intimadates,
in a battle scene your self esteem decinagrates, ( dont know how to spell it)
enter your mainframe like a virus interrates, (breaks down)
first to one folder then open me I activate,
started with this thread now I spread through Hip Hop,
invision free without me your like a horse with no clip clop,
n now for my last lines i shout to Groove City,
now my goal is to get in Hip Hop's inner commitee....
it was more of what just came to my head not a certain topic
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feedback people man, uppin,
I WANNA ELAVATE MAN FEEDBACK!!!
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FEEDBACK!! uppin...
need to elavate....
if ive posted on your open mic then return the favor
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Yo this was aight...it started off good but when it was gettin near da end it seemed like it was slippin away....but good vocab and rhymes...keep it up dogg...holla back
DaYoungsta boy!!! :shoot: :cussing: :shoot:
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it was ok it got a little better in the end,,,u said it get worse in the end yourself so imma say get some confidence be cocky and sht..but it was you keep doin you nuthin but love
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you want cocky you got it,
thanks for the feedback, im trying to elavate,
i got a long time to elavate im only 14 peace out
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i want to elavate so i need all the feedback possible people, come on, uppin for some critics, i dont care good or bad, or worse i dont CARE NEED FEEDBACK!!
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Straight,
Vocab-Dope
Structure-Medicore
Overall-Lil Crunk, Lil Straight ........So.......Striank!
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uppin for some feedback people...
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that was good... keep at it kidd.. you got some potential I lyke ya rhyme structure n shit
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thanks for the feedback kid, i appreciate it, uppin for more feedback
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feedback..
uppin for some feedback...
elavation is need, FEEDBACK!!
:shoot: :thumbup:
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some nice shit here, look at my next post
It should show up in a few
I liked your flow and shit
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nice drop, mixtape. vocab = excellent, structure = good, your worplay was some awesome shit too. i liked the whole concept.
keep elevatin'.. 14, and droppin' some skill. no doubt.
