Goodbye, Bitch...

Goodbye, Bitch...

I’ve never known your love when it wasn’t hurting me…
But now I’ve grown above your insults bursting free.
Your dismal thirsting needs feed off emotions for you…
Add charisma and flirting deeds, that’s a potion so true.
Short, boyish hair you wear often masks your softness…
Green eyes throughout the ride, God, I don’t want off this.
Like dropkicks I’m floored every time I touch your skin…
Cool creamy flesh ignores the warmth you keep within.
But you won’t let me in, bodies mesh yet hearts divide…
Despite all the times we’ve cried and tried to get it right.
So I’m putting you behind, ignoring your alluring scent…
Though I feel I’ll die if I don’t breathe your contempt.
You were only for rent, never owned by a single soul…
So this lease has to end, goodbyes on a wrinkled note.
I’d never have the strength to wrench away from you…
Your image is like a jinx that’ll drench my feet in glue.
So silently I write, letting my hurt heart bleed on paper…
Let loose the pain you provide through my tear’s vapor.
Then escape ya, bags packed with clothes and pride…
And the manhood you couldn’t, but tried to throw aside.

Because I don’t feel alive.

Even though everything you are is what I wanted…
It turns out everything you aren’t is what counted.

Word Perfect - 10 Minute Keystyle

Phrantik - Payday

As Expected You Have Such A Border Line Personality In Your Songs Its So East To Believe That Your Crazy Do To Your Lyrics But Your Topics Make It So Easy To Relate Im Amazed You Havent Lost It Yet Lol.as Always Great Work Some Slow Sides But Great Work None The Less.
P.S. I HOPE YOUR SEED AND QUEEN ARE DOING WELL I HAVENT SEEN PICS SINCE BIRTH BUT THATS ALRIGHT STINGY MOTHERFUCKER LOL/

Loved this man.. flow was on-point, structure was cool.. the content was great tho.. you got a way of wording things that just like.. hooks me to your piece.. I read the first few lines.. n' then I knew I had to finish..

Like dropkicks I’m floored every time I touch your skin…
Cool creamy flesh ignores the warmth you keep within.
^ loved the first line.. good shit.

You were only for rent, never owned by a single soul…
So this lease has to end, goodbyes on a wrinkled note.
I’d never have the strength to wrench away from you…
Your image is like a jinx that’ll drench my feet in glue.
^ 2nd line is dope.. liked the last one.. gave me a picture of her bein' so nice that when you see her, you don't wanna leave her..

Overall - this shit was righteous.. feelin' it.. keep droppin' my man.. n' check the link plz.. Pz.


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=1886680

Bumpity Bump Bump!

As always u droppin hot shit BTK. Not as tyte as yo one bout ur daughter and goin thru pain, but this still portrayed a woman and emotions and u delivered it nicely. Kept me gripped, wasnt too complex which i like and wasnt madd long either. Keep droppin my man.

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Thanks, my man...

Anymore?

thought this was well worded, as usual, i liked the scheme yo used, it kept it nice and smooth... some interesting lines in there, i liked this bar -

I’d never have the strength to wrench away from you…
Your image is like a jinx that’ll drench my feet in glue.


all in all, tight stuff

hit one of my drops man... later

Thanks, man...

I'll do that.