Presahdent

M203, grenade launcher
GWB hidin at camp david
that fuckin monster
iraq doesnt have no skid missiles, scud whatever you knew what i meant
he is suchah... or should i say her?
Who was i talkin about?
Hello Mrs. President, can i take yo ordah?
Dubulya poutin in the cornah cuz his viagra didnt work
toss him ovah yo shouldah
spank that pussy's ass
tell him not to send our souljahs ovah there
this whole thing was about osama
but hey its cool we got saddam
but he was just buttfuckin a lllama, who the fuck was he a threat to :huh:
but fuck it its done now
Got re elected for 4 years?
better make that two.
Ive got this m-82 pointed straight at you.
I hope you have a viewing so people can look thru
that mutha fuckin whole in yer head, and see how full of shit you really are.

Haha M203 just spit a verse to ASSassINate an ASShole.
Sure you wont take it to muthah fuckin seriously
peace homie.



M-82 -http://matrix.dumpshock.com/raygun/firearms/amr/bar_m82.html- It is a .50 Caliber sniper rifle.


M203-http://www.karlsplace.co.uk/images/m4_m203.jpg-Basically it Launches a grenade at 80mph that will explode on impact.

Review, anyone.?

Well i dont know what to say bout this, its good in parts and as youve posted 4 posts its ight but i dont know where ya structure is lol but yeah youll get better im sure.
Peace out

wasnt feeling it see fam what u need to do is extract on ur rhyme scheme in a audio this can work fine but other then that ur joints to short for text u kno

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tell him not to send our souljahs ovah there
this whole thing was about osama

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tell our president not to fight other religions and cultures//sendin our hard fightin soulja's//to meet they death over and over//Christ battilin mindstates of karma//and this war only resulted with the only thing between bush's dad and osma

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like thats how i'd write it for a text based post fam u kno its more constructive and vivid with the imagry ur painting
stay up
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Thanks Tech that is exactly what I was looking for, I am very new to this(I generally jus write random stuff).

you need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

i wasnt really feelin it or maybe i didnt get it,,maybe ineed to hear it outloud but anyway not negative or nuttin eybody has their own style like but take a lil time and think..aight love