ayo ayo ayo

to get my point across,imma point across we can roll or joust
close ya mouth put a hole in ya blouse,ima ouch you
knock the blood up out you,before its exposed its about blue
the same color ya damn bruise..
i cant loose bitch ill neva quit,in a brown overcoat boots color a shit
wit a black mask on close ya shutter and skit
cuz i react in 3 stages but aint playin a skit
ion bitch the fuk out thats the broad way
but up show up on you cats like broadway,we on broadway in the middle of the center,i been sick ass fuk since my moms spit placenta
and shit afterbirth when the afterbirth hit the floor
i started pullin these gats from my stomach like a umbilicol cord
this a typical sport bat and the ball its all about timing
got fukin white gold runnin around my diamonds
ya hear....

betta jump back hell nah you cant touch it
F.A.M. will put waves in ya hair line like you constantly brushin
slap you wit the bisquit in ya face now you permanent blushin
put the pellet in ya back ya raise ya hands like you up for discussion
so step to the podium dope you wit opium
fuk up ya winter wit blood shed thatll turn ya may berry like opie and nem
im gon play poker wit them and hope you got a full house
imma kill ya granny ya whole family even clip ya bow wow and make him bouce
i dont gotta get announce my facial expressions they speak for me
they say im sweet and make em grind they teeth like pusha t
im on a malicious spree suspicious things wit paraphanalia
this what the consumer thought when i consume the hawk its a walkin seller
or a walkin felon a sittin victim hit and stick em
i treat this niggas like weed grow and pick em smoke and spit em
i be coughn venom along wit yellow mucus flem
im so rare when i rip a 10 im leavin a spark like i shitted a gem

ya

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lacks umph if its ment for punchlines but other then that it was ill work

a straightforward shit talking piece with some nice punches and a lot of agression. you've got multis dwon to a tee but you should really work on your vocab as well. bear in mind that you get more positive feedback on this board for an original topic.

keep on posting, keep elavating.

if you could rep one of mine i'd like the feedback.

Yo wasn't that tight to me but it was alright...u need ta think more about ya vocab tho because it was kind of scrappy...but u had a good flow to it and i like some of ya punches...keep droppin..holla back

DaYoungsta boy!!! :shoot: :cussing: :shoot: