The world have turned wrong!

The world have turned wrong When USA lost the war in Vietnamn
But even worser when USA brought down the mighty Saddam
Bush said the war was over for sixteen month ago
But everyone now the war is harder now then it ever been before
At the desert iraqing sand plateau
It´s wrong letting peoples with bad temptations rule the USA
It reflects on the relations with other nations for the USA
Just like Powell did when he convinsed Bush to a dramatic self- transformation
And create the greatest war for a long time with the Middle East Envasion

It´s amazin that Bush got elected
But even more amazing that he got re-elected
Acts must be taken-Spread the information-Bush can´t rule any nation
Violence give birth to violence in every action
So Let´s stop these hating-Before we all die in a thermonuclear reaction
Ignore the military rating-Start insted the dating... And maybe later you can start your mating

Jesus Walks
(And Talks)

/ Big Fax



Check this out!
1.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=158264
2.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=158131

Can I get some Ups?
Jesus Walks!

Thanks!
/ Big Fax

good idea on the whole verse, but you really need to fix up the lines, vocab, structure and flow. Your new so you'll obviously elevate just work on it. Try to make your lines about of equal length.

check my piece
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=158712