First, the replies.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...07#post1863907
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...06#post1864006
Next, the verse:
I contain the best parts inherent in both dragon and man,
Bringing drama comparable to civil war in Kazakhstan
Strength of a dragon but the mind of human,
And insight in the form of extreme acumen,
Confusing weak emcees when I spit multi-syllabic phrases,
I show genius comes in both shades and phases,
The dragon within blazes all fools in my proximity,
And me being great is a fact, therefore it’s a case of unanimity,
I’m literally, lyrically a fire breathing beast,
The minute Pandora opened the box, I was released,
Deceased emcees would attest to my talent,
And the fact that in a battle I’m unflinching and Gallant,
Unfortunately I leave them like the people of Pompeii
Bodies burnt till they achieve the consistency of clay,
My rhymes achieve Fahrenheit nine hundred and ninety nine,
Every time I spit, shit emcees are left dazzled and blind,
Flash enough wordplay to give all epileptics seizures,
And enough of a cultured overtone to contend with that of Caesar’s,
Earth Shattering enough to have fucked up Atlantis,
I could write this text in Canaanite, but you wouldn’t comprehend without semantics,
I impress the world with pseudo-mythological antics,
That are comparable to the actions of the late great romantics,
Always attacking artist lacking academia with alliteration,
And if you can’t understand my words, you don’t deserve an explanation,
A binary arithmetic operation could prove I’m better than you,
But I’d waste it on an emcee that can’t increase the exponential of x to 2,
And tell me what he’s worked out after multiplying by pi,
Where x=r, will you even bother to attempt to try?
I run rings around weak emcees like particles of ice and dust,
And because they’re made of gas, with the slightest spark they will combust,
Jupiter may have been the number one roman deity,
But he’s just a rip off of from the Greeks proved by the blatant homogeneity,
My insight predates all of modern society’s vernacular,
To the extent that dead poets will all say that I’m spectacular,
The tactics Napoleon used don’t bear comparing to my genius,
As this Dragon comes with many styles, and they all are heterogeneous.
All I was doing here really was mucking around, seeing how far I could go with putting in a lot of vocabulary and concepts. I could have done some things better (like the finisher, which I think just cuts off without any impact), and It did kind of meander without really going anywhere. I'm just curious to see what people think of it. Any comments?
