Interlude

Interlude

Knowledge is blasted out of minds like amplifiers,
rhymed and produced over truth's two turntables.
Ideas transmit beats through these hidden cables,
serene melodies capture poverties implied words.

"Yes, yes, ya'll."
..and freedom freefalls.
"but ya dont..."

Stop.

Thoughts just mosh into many lost crowded bodies
Creating naked pits of ego's with few true survivors
A guitarist's solo sold halo's but pulled soul's trigger
Branding scarred youth on all viewing new humanity

(Melodic riffs rift fate
Mic check, 1 - too late
the beat faints...)

Society rightly forgot to time signature this rhythm
since It can't be measured by any mans metronome
Musical dreams are now heard, if only in monotone
Sterotypes still blaring beliefs in soundproof schisms

Heartbeat: Stop
Music: Shot

Headphones: Off

read it. i'll reply tomorrow.

lol. i actually liked this Mind. creating reality with assumptions,
that is so original.
anyways, your vocabulary was superb and partook a huge part in this peice. you know what im sayin?
it flowed very well, and structure fitted in well also. you understand what im sayin?
anyways, i liked reading this peice, and would like to read more aswell.
nice work Mind. keep doing what you do.
be strong and stay strong man.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=154671

Return......Thanx.

thanks marek, ill go read yours.

i saw real talent here something that can grab almost any hip hop head i think you did very well here stay up