The Neighbor I hate(I fucked yo wife)

Peep this when you sleepin Im a creep in ya house
knock you out then me an yo spouse be gettin down on couch
then when you come to me an yo boo is still screwin
down stairs pullin her hair takin of dat pussy a you aint been usein
you walk in the room an scream "girl what are doin"
dumb question since you can see its me shes doin
you shoulda seen it she took my penis to the esphagous
then I busted the kinda nut that make king tut turn in his sarcfagous
but i'll let you watch it later dog I taped the whole show
Think I'll name it "Dr.Anus rapes another haters ho"
it'll be the sequel since I did the same shit last week
that means you been suckin my dick this week via her lips
it's not my fault your wife wanted to be in a porn
But that's what you get for lettin yo dog shit on my lawn.

what ya'll think

wow...how does some like this come to ur mind?...lyrically this wasn'T ALL THAT great but the idea was pretty coo I think....keep working on ya writing....pz

You can't creep in my house, That chrome 380 will take you out
Have you drippin you can't get the da stains out even if you SHOUT
If didn't get that, you can't get with me that's a fact
I gotta gangsta girl, that don't put up with perv's and that's word
She know how to use the heata, she'll bend ya like a fuckin curb
Taught her to aim for pressure points, to damage ya nerves
If I told her to fuck you, in about point five seconds you be through
She pulled a jack move, got you out ya pockets, guess she fucked you?
Everyday homeboy you da play, like that DJ you getting SQREWED........

bluntman66 yer das kool keep workin at it tho ... n lol at lawn n porn how u think of that

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.


But this was ok lol....It made me laugh at some spots though which is good...But none the less it was a interesting short read lol...Should have been longer though i felt just seemed like you could have went a little longer with it though but overall it was a alright piece...something funny lol...Keep at it my man.

thnx ya'll fo the feedback, cept fo camoflauge dog where you goin wit that shit

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