rules.
u spit 1st.
oppent has to match more or same amount of lines.
gotta spit ya shit by Nov.6 11:59pm
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rules.
u spit 1st.
oppent has to match more or same amount of lines.
gotta spit ya shit by Nov.6 11:59pm
aiight man lets make this shit quick.. check in ill have ten lines up in about 10 minutes
ok just checkin in
this is the link to his battle that i used a few personals off of and check his profile for the other personals : http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...52#post1797252
ok here it is
yo
everytime this guys approached by a ~dame chicks eyes scream~
cuz he's repulsive, and his FROM: ~explains his hygein~
he's far from dope, this mothafuckas starved and broke
and the only thing that aint been up his ass is a bar of soap
"dirty dirty",come on kid take a shower
your mothers pubic region is filled with more hair than austin powers
wanna battle me? dog make your flow improve
you cant get a win for your life, your 0 and 2
and everything you've dones wack kid,
you've got young tactics
say your crew is SD? must stand for Slow Dumbasses,
sky is smashing ya, your just a wack spitter,
how the hell you rhyme the word melts with fantastica? (check the link i posted)
you've never held shit down, your just a helpless clown
kid's so stupid he puts numbers by his lines just to help him count
like your too stupid enough to do it in ya mind,
i typed this up quick but screw it youve been slimed
who da fuck is the girl i mean guy, mc sky
yea he really made me cry
Syke! dat dyke didnt have 1 hard punch
he was to busy with his mom havin a crunch.
and ya axed wtf is fanastica? in spanish its fanastic
heres 2 cents for ya plastic
o its a burgery wit ya tryin to have plastic surgery xcuse da spellin plz
yea a boob job as ya give y mothers nob a blow job for a have a peice of corn on the cob
whered ya find this nigga?
@ a gay jigga
i should step back cuz when i speak his dick gets bigga
hey mad love 2 mc sky
good rhyme bro
you too.. peace im bout to bounce......................
ups
my 3rd up
aight,
MC Sky, i thought u had a straight verse...structure prolly coulda used a lil work, but there was still a good flow to it....u had decent personals n punches, n u were also consistent wit 'em....i also liked the number of multis u used....good verse...
HotShot, u definitely need some work dawg...first off, the structure was horrendous yo...some lines seemed to lack words while others were stretched....overall, u didnt have any real good material...a lot of the rhymes/concepts were basic...u need to elevate...no hate, jus some honest feedback....
V/ MC Sky, for an overall better verse...
^my bad, i polled for the wrong MC...a mod'll fix that tho, prolly by tomorrow...
fixed - tr
hot shot- one word describes u herb lol jk just elevate a lil dawg
mc skye u took dis one but i cant vote yet keep yo game up
mc sky's first four lines were good,than he started falling off but he still did way better than hot shot,hot shot came weak and played and his verse was too short and not creative enuff so mc sky gets my vote easily
ps.yo mc sky return the favor in my sig where it says dry birds thx -1-
ight and was stucture againQuote:
Originally Posted by Revel
my 4th up