shortie...feedback plz...

baby gurl, u always been there for me
dub sacks,rubs to the back,lick of the nut sack for me
never fronted, always confrontin bitches for me
got love for u like husbands for they wifeys
but imma p.i.m.p cant really let it happen
cuz i got way too many tipdrill's that i be tappin
but gurl listen, if we lost contact u the one i'd be missin
the only gurl that i'm kissin, the only gurl that i want in my kitchen
the only gurl that i give my attention
not to mention the size of ya ass'es dimension
n ya beautiful face n the way ya mouth taste
to the way the rest of ya body is shaped
n i cant forget the places that are shaved
u the only female i can cuddle wit after sex
the only one i aint ashamed to take to "my projects"
u the only female i know wit as many shoes as me
n when she got plans wit her gurls she chooses me
this gurl is my ryde or die chick
so when i say shortie wanna ride.. she hops on the dick
she thick smother her wit jewelry like slick rick
super freak like rick.....james bitch!
she my main squeeze main tease dammit she my down ass bitch!!



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Hmmm...Iunno on this piece, started good but kinda fell off, then got better. Opener wasnt too good either, flow was aight, easy to read and no long complex words which made this an easy read. Jus i never got into what u was spittin, like i can relate to what u b spittin but i aint imaginin it, i aint feelin ya emotion in it. Keep elevatin tho.

:thumbup:

Return favor plz:

Do You Really Know?

I Refused To Read On After Reading The Lines...
"lick of the nut sack for me."
...That Lost All My Interest In Piece.

Just Had 2Say, Not Really An Opinion.

Now Back To Your Proper Feed....................
Any1 Else Got Anything 2Say On This?

:D

thanks for the feed...^^^ who the fuck is this???!!! ahhh i really dont care he's nobody keep the feedback comin unless u gonna say some retard shit like dude above me , i dont mind returnin the favor ...

yo fam im feelin this a lil...you started off nice as fuck but u kinda fell off at the end...keep it up though nah mean...WUN

It wasnt some retarted shit G-Money... That line was just pathetic imo, an i didnt want 2read on.

Thanks For The Feed Back Keep It Comin!!!!