Peer Pressure. Exclusive

Song: Peer Pressure

If yer in the wrong spot it might not lead you to your treasure
But sometimes all that happens is broken arms and no pleasure
Don’t look into the mirror or you might see a ugly reflection
Its you in the mirror it broke cuz yer full of hate & rejection
Peer pressure always merks you in your sleep
Even when yer drop top down in your dream real deep
Peer pressure is always behind you even when yer haven fun
Playin a game of basketball, sometimes you feel like takin a run
Don’t get mad real fast cuz then you’ll be jumpen to temptaten
I kno its putting pressure on you but who can take it, its frustraten

Some try to get away from it, cause they think there so aggressive
They just relized theres no chance of gettin away, its so impressive
Taken yer run to get at your old annoyed rival is hard-to-do
You just witnessed peer pressure, and if you kno more then name two
Some people try to attack strong cuz they think there barbaric
But naw its just like I pull strings off there back like im generic
You have just witnessed to much, its like peer pressure is numeric
I hope you feelin me when I say to you that lifes full of pressure
Don’t let me catch you actin up cuz im young, and more fresher
Switch and get yer kicks because if not, you mine as well not apply
Now you know what peer pressure stands for so im sayin my good-bye

This was averageish. Concept in bleh. The vording could have been better. Overall, this was ok. Not great, but not horrible. In the middle. Keep writing.

yea i give it 4.5/10

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.