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Yo, u need to check my ability
cuz i flow with so much agility/
you'll think i'ma boxer
hittin u with these punchlines
i'll eat your rhmes like it's lunch time/
no way u can touch mine/
Haters tryin to seize me
but for me this comes easy/
bustin my flow so freely/
it's like u blind cuz u cant see me
some of these cats are fruitier than tha loom/
so they forcin me to pop them lika a balloon.
Yo Nice Multi'z And Flow Keep Doing It
It Would Be Betta If U Wrote More But,,,,,dats An Good One~!!
Drop An Feedback In My Open Mic
~the Perfect World~
~peace~
iight herres what i think...
when u gatta drop an open mic u gatta focus on one thing and like break it down to the last all in ya verse....nah mean?
and when u write your verse u gatta make em of the same length so it can flow and peeps gon feel it big time!!!
then as for the rhymes u good...vocab can get better..
ps : this topic is a lil too basic but as i can c u new....its iight :)
props for trying tho :)
after viewing some of the pieces posted in this forum I have come to the conclusion that some peepz are only replying to stuff to get replies themselves....that's cheap...I mean where are the mutlis in this...piece was simple and too short to grasp an idea of ya skills...dog drop some mo so we can really get an inside on ya Ability...nahmean...decent...pz
You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.
This wasnt too bad, I didnt feel it that much, but I can tell ur not quite as newbish as I would ahve thought, some multis, you did have metas, no real punchlines, but I can see u understand the concept of metas and multis somewhat, keep dropping, I'd like to see something a little longer, with a better topic
how about returning the favor???....pz